Love Like War

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    Hey, are you back on Mibba yet? Can we get back to this? I'm super excited to write. Crazy
    March 19th, 2015 at 03:31am
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    Yeah. Im back in asense. Im just getting stuff ready for college. but I should be able to give off some atention. So, I ned to write yes?
    March 19th, 2015 at 03:34am
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    Yes, I do believe it's your turn! But we can discuss more of the plot first, if you need to get back into the story.
    March 19th, 2015 at 03:36am
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    Yeah id like that.
    March 19th, 2015 at 03:42am
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    March 19th, 2015 at 03:43am
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    Okay guys, let's re-discuss! Before we went on a hiatus (a year!!), we had passed Vicky and Drew's first meeting at the museum, and in the last chapter posted she had also had a brief interaction with AK that wasn't all that pleasant. As AK's chapter is next, are we having that be the chapter that he swoops in and pretends to be with her in front of Johnny, or are we doing it where Drew's talking to him about his date with Vicky and have the chapter show their CIA stuff (I vote for the latter - so that we don't have the two AK meetings right after each other).

    Here's also a list of things we've previously discussed:
    • After Drew's date and AK's drinks with Vicky, one of the men do a background search on her and leave the file on their desk which is how come the other finds out
    • They pledge that they don't want her to find out that they know each other
    • At one time, they have to go away on a mission together and Vicky gets suspicious about both the guys being gone at the exact same time
    • Both men (for some unknown reason) decide to put listening devices in Vicky's house while it's empty - a plan neither know the other is doing - to try and learn more about her to win her from the other
    • At some point, Chloe discovers one of the devices and leads to a freak-out with the sisters
    • Drew and AK blame each other for the indiscretion, then find out which device that was found and the culprit is revealed between the two, which leads to a bit of rubbing it in as they failed to discreetly hide a device from a primary school teacher
    • Vicky tells one (not necessarily the one she prefers)/maybe both (?) about the discovery, and he will offer to doublecheck the house for her
    • Drew overhears Vicky and Chloe discussing how he's kinda boring (in a good way) which leads to him taking her to a rock concert and forcing her into the moshpit
    Annnnnnd, that's all I spotted that we'd discussed so far. Think
    March 19th, 2015 at 04:19am
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    YAY! I'm excited to get back into this! It has been a year since we've worked on it, right? Haha, well, I remember some of these ideas. i'm going to need to find some time to look through everything. And yeah, I agree that we should incorporate some CIA stuff, change things up a bit, instead of the Vicky/AK encounter for back to back chapters. Kind of mix things up, find some variety.
    March 20th, 2015 at 02:37am
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    So, in my chapter, I can show a mission of sorts? Wait until the next time I write for the meeting?
    March 20th, 2015 at 02:46am
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    So, in my chapter, I can show a mission of sorts? Wait until the next time I write for the meeting?
    March 20th, 2015 at 02:46am
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    Yeah, I think it's best that you show a mission or CIA stuff, as well as AK's life and possibly more of his friendship with Drew before this whole girl drama starts. Then Drew's chapter could be his dinner with Vicky, and I could then have AK and Vicky's encounter in mine, with it being in such close proximity to the dinner with Drew that it irritates her more because she had just had dinner with a nice guy, and now having drinks with another guy.
    March 20th, 2015 at 02:54am
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    I can do that.

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    March 20th, 2015 at 04:18am
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    I just read through the first five chapters we've had so far to refresh my memories, but yeah and also maybe in your chapter, just include a line or something about Drew being excited about that date he is going with Vicky on Friday night... just make him completely geek out and AK teasing him.
    March 20th, 2015 at 06:42am
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    @ captain mactruck
    that works for me, I can end it that way. Okay as soon as this death sickness leaves me, i should be able to write.
    March 20th, 2015 at 07:59am
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    Aww okay! Good luck recuperating! And thanks :)
    March 22nd, 2015 at 01:51am
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    Hey, how are you? How's the chapter coming along? Cute
    April 27th, 2015 at 05:14am
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    Its going okay. To be honest, I haven't wrote much because of personal issues. I will finish it as fast as I can.
    April 27th, 2015 at 05:45am
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    Just checking in with you and how you are with the chapter! Cute
    May 29th, 2015 at 11:11pm
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    Ive been dealing with college admissions but I now have time. Thus story is getting my attention back this week.
    June 8th, 2015 at 12:36am
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    Yay, that's good to hear! Cute
    June 9th, 2015 at 12:40am