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  • kili the dwarf

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    @ luminos.
    Yay! I'm gonna go read it now.
    =)
    December 28th, 2013 at 05:37pm
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    @ naruto uzumaki
    Yay I hope you like it!
    December 28th, 2013 at 07:22pm
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    @ luminos.
    I did like it.
    Smile

    Now it's up to Calli.

    Did you ever get to read my chapter? Was it good, or should I change it up a bit?
    December 28th, 2013 at 07:29pm
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    @ luminos.
    @ naruto uzumaki

    I'M ALIVE.
    Sorry for being MIA.

    Anyways, I'll read both of your chapters now. :)
    December 29th, 2013 at 04:14am
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    @ She Said Poptarts
    YAY!
    Welcome back.
    December 29th, 2013 at 04:27pm
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    @ She Said Poptarts
    Hey Calli, are you going to be updating this weekend?
    January 3rd, 2014 at 06:36pm
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    @ kili the dwarf
    Sunday, correct? :)
    Yup, I'm working on it!
    January 4th, 2014 at 05:02am
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    @ kili the dwarf

    So I was wondering if I should write a little from Liam's point of view, from where he leaves Louis and Clara's group to scavenge for food and other weapons, and in my next chapter he meets up with Grace and Michael. And maybe in Marissa's they all come together since it'll be Chapter 6?

    And Crystel, I love your second chapter. Clap
    Especially the way you wrote Niall's part, it made me sad for him though. He only had his brother, who is a zombie. My poor baby.
    January 4th, 2014 at 08:41pm
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    @ She Said Poptarts
    I think that could work out.

    And I was wondering if we still wanted them to come together in chapter six or if they do it could be at the tail end of the chapter? Or however you guys think will work the best.

    Oh thanks, I was worried about that Niall part, I wondered if it was emotional enough. Cause in my head it is, but I wasn't sure if it conveyed well into words.

    @ luminos.
    January 5th, 2014 at 01:00am
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    @ She Said Poptarts
    Are you going to be posting your chapter soon?
    January 6th, 2014 at 06:24am
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    @ kili the dwarf

    Hi, sorry for being inactive on Mibba! I'm looking over the chapter now, and I'll send it in a bit.

    also, do we have a word count goal? Should we have one? I just don't want it to be too short, or too long.
    January 9th, 2014 at 03:17am
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    @ She Said Poptarts
    I was thinking the word count should be at least 1500 words. Most of my chapters are nearly 3000 though.
    January 10th, 2014 at 02:35am
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    @ luminos.

    I would like to apologize for missing a sunday, but I sent my chapter.
    Anyways, I was thinking that when they're in the group, Michael and Grace can be like, "Biters? ... I like that! OK, we'll call them biters now."
    January 12th, 2014 at 08:41am
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    Okay ladies I posted! Are we still in this story?
    Cause I would hate to write my next chapter and we aren't all still in this together?
    We should probably discuss the next upcoming chapter too.
    January 19th, 2014 at 05:54pm
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    @ kili the dwarf
    Yes, I am still in this!

    So I'm next, sand I was thinking that Liam would be out scavenging, and that it was something he preferred to do alone. I see him as a huge family person, he loved his family so much. And when the apocalypse hit, he left them behind because he couldn't be around when things happened to them. He didn't want to see them tear into each other's skin. And he runs into Michael and Grace.

    And he overhears them talking, possibly about Louis. And that's when he reveals himself because he knows the situation well, since Louis doesn't keep to himself.

    Also after writing Michael I want more chapters with him before he dies.
    January 19th, 2014 at 06:47pm
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    @ She Said Poptarts
    I'm still in too!
    January 19th, 2014 at 07:12pm
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    @ luminos.

    Okay good!

    And Calli, yes I think Liam running into Grace and Michael will be good. And a good way to start tying everyone in together.

    Marissa, did you have any plans for your upcoming chapter. I know we said that was the chapter where they were all going to meet, but if you want to have it where Calli and your group unites, I can write where my group meets both of yours?

    And since Calli wants to have a few more chapters with Michael, we can maybe have it where they make a small camp and things seem to be going well for about a week or so and then a hoard strikes? Just tossing out some ideas.
    January 19th, 2014 at 08:00pm
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    @ luminos.
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    So what's the game plan you guys?
    Are we still doing this? I know we all have things going on and such, but we gotta communicate here.
    January 27th, 2014 at 05:13pm
  • luminos.

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    @ kili the dwarf
    I'm still in! I thought we had this round of chapters fully planned out?
    January 27th, 2014 at 06:00pm
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    I had asked what y'alls plans were because I have no idea what ideas we are going with. Plus no one updated this Sunday or mentioned anything, so I just want to make sure we are all on the same page.

    So what are we doing for this next round? Cause I know Calli was changing some stuff up and I changed some stuff up too.
    January 27th, 2014 at 06:32pm