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    Here's our greedy Edward. Since greed has to do with "violence, trickery, or manipulation of authority" he's gonna be a big trouble maker and thief. :D

    Porter's a social butterfly, popular for being nice, maybe someone lots of kids go to for advice, and is in a lot of good doing clubs (key club, gardening club, stuff like that)

    I was think about Greed and Gluttony relationship should it still be as the last one where Greed willingly spoiled Gluttony, or would they perhaps clash because Greed wants to keep things to himself but gluttony wants everything.

    Also I feel like the second boy for Zaiden looks more like someone who'd take too much a lot.
    August 14th, 2014 at 04:00am
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    So here's Zaiden!

    I think that greed and gluttony should maybe clash at first and maybe later on greed willingly spoils gluttony or something like that.

    And Catie, but he's perfect for lust! I think you should just keep him. c:
    August 14th, 2014 at 06:07am
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    I like the idea of greed spoiling gluttony. It shows that he has and wants excess but doesn't "mind" sharing it with his one other person!
    August 14th, 2014 at 10:56am
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    And thanks Britt! I like him too! The same guy has pictures as a little scene kid as well so I have that if we all change our minds x)
    August 14th, 2014 at 10:57am
  • polka dot perfection

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    I love all the above mentioned names/pics/ideas and I have updated the front page:)
    Now i just have to find a pic/name for Envy...
    August 15th, 2014 at 07:16pm
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    So I don't know if we've mentioned this before about Envy and Lusts relationship, but are we having them butt heads while together? Since I mean, Lust is going to basically want everyone, and Envy is well... Envy xD
    August 15th, 2014 at 07:18pm
  • polka dot perfection

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    envy?

    and the way they had it last time was that envy loved lust but lust was like "i can't love anyone" and all, and that's all he would say even after he realized envy loved him becaseu at first he was oblivious.

    and I was htinking more like...what if envy is envious of him when lust is with "outsiders" but he doesn't mind if its one of the other sins?

    OOOOH and what if like before the manifestation, envy was envious of lust and he was just like obsessed kind of envious and the sometime before manifestation he like has an epiphany and is like oh, it's not that I want that. It's that I want that to be mine. ?
    August 15th, 2014 at 07:24pm
  • polka dot perfection

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    also how about Cael as envy's name?
    August 15th, 2014 at 07:53pm
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    Yes! I love him for Envy! And Cael is a real cute name!

    The idea behind their relationship is perfect too, maybe they can come to an agreement like "as long as you come home to me, I don't care what happens in between." But like waaaaay later on.

    Because I see Lust as someone who gets what he wants, especially after the manifestation. So he'll say whatever he can to keep Envy around.
    August 15th, 2014 at 08:02pm
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    oh my goodness he is perfect for envy! and Cael is definitely a cute name!
    August 15th, 2014 at 08:11pm
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    I didn't even notice his shirt said envy!
    August 15th, 2014 at 10:25pm
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    lol oh my goodness it does!
    August 16th, 2014 at 01:59am
  • A S K I N G .

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    ah, the shirt! It was a sign :D
    I like that relationship idea too <3
    August 16th, 2014 at 02:14am
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    That's so perfect! What a good catch Sari xD
    August 16th, 2014 at 02:57am
  • polka dot perfection

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    Haha yay, Im happy everyone likes it:) and I just got the message that 2 more authors are in, so ill send them the link to the page tomorrow when I get on the computer and see which of our secondary characters they prefer:)
    August 16th, 2014 at 08:54am
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    Okay awesome!!
    August 16th, 2014 at 02:24pm
  • polka dot perfection

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    ok so let's do the by8 chpters plan and then get down to the nitty gritty chapter by chapter thing.

    so I'm just throwing this out there, let me know how it goes:

    1 - daily lives
    2 - soem manifest
    3 - more manifest
    4 - pandora manifest, calls them together - (should they live together? like pandora was left a lot of money by the last pandora to get a mansion they could all live in together? Idk about it though....but it would be weird if they're all not always together and story progession would take longer because they'd have to travel to one another.....)
    5 - they know theyre supposed to get along and pandora tries to make it work but they all have such distinct personalities that it's like wtffff and everyone is testy - pandora forgets about the book because he's worried about everyone working together
    6 - frustration builds and they're having trouble controlling the powers, it's rubbing off on normal people around them and stuff like that.
    7 - pandora remembers the book and works with everyone about controlling their power, which is detailed in the book, and the tension is there and everyone doesn't quite want to be working together but they begrudgingly do so
    8 - better control of their powers
    9 - some kind of drama, be it someone's relationship (maybe when pride was goign to kill himself or something?)
    10 - settling down into life with their powers and one another

    so yeah, this is very rough, throw in all the edits/shit I'm forgetting:D
    August 18th, 2014 at 05:04am
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    If they live together, maybe in the same neighborhood or apartment building?
    August 18th, 2014 at 05:38am
  • polka dot perfection

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    but like it owuldn't make sense really if they just all lived in the same apartment because they won't know one another well enough a nd more of them would be aquainted with that and idk about the whole having to travel to houses, maybe its just me lol:)
    August 18th, 2014 at 05:47am
  • Still Dreaming

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    They could all be foster kids in the same foster home. Then on Pandoras 18th birthday he can come into that large sum of money left over from the previous pandora. That way they really don't have rules, they could be the oldest kids there so they have their own secluded area, and most people don't adopt 17 year olds!
    August 18th, 2014 at 11:32am