Worst Story You've Written

A story called Overcome that I posted on Quizilla in 2003. It was a Good Charlotte fanfic with Paul (the bassist) as the main character.

On mibba, it would be my Aled Phillips story, My Poetry Is Better Than Your Poetry. It's incredibly poorly written, and the only reason that it's still up is because I wrote it for Nina. However my first slash, We All Want Something Else, wasn't exactly great either. It was the whole cliche story and every time I see it, I cringe.

My first actual story that I put effort into. It's a travesty. The writing is terrible, the characters are ALL mary-sues, and the plot couldn't fail more if I tried.

Try all of them. I'm no good :file:

The worst story I've ever posted on Mibba was Cabin Fever; basically, it was a PWP Fraycest love triangle that took place in a damn cabin. Not only do I hate the title but it was just... all sex and I hated it.

I ended up eventually taking down, much to the dismay of some people, and I highly doubt it will ever emerge again. :file:

My old Frank Iero story, which has since been deleted, called Like Fire.
It was full of holes and it was rushed and bleh :XD

Pretty much everything I've ever written besides Fling. I dislike most of my writing, so liking that one is pretty surprising.

The first story I ever wrote on Mibba when I was new.
It was bad grammar, bad dialogue, unrealistic and I just couldn't continue with it.
I'm rewriting it right now.

On Mibba? hands down 'Our hearts are beating out of synch'. It is your typical cliche plotline. It was the first thing I posted on here. She is in an unhappy relationship, she goes to a gig, catches Caleb Turmans eye. She then proceeds to get her drink spiked, he saves her. They fall instantly in love. Blech

Basically it's lame, had no creative merit and everything about it makes me cringe.

I would have to say the first two stories I ever wrote. They're on Quizillia, and it was a Frerard. Despite of the lack of plot (in my opinion, since I completely winged it) and overdose of cliches, it was my style back then that made it a hit.

Nonetheless, that was years ago, and I've improved, so I might consider revising it. Might take some work, since I haven't written a Frerard in years, and I'm so prone to Rydons or actor slashes. Either way, I didn't like them p:

My first fanfics ><

Shiteness, rly.

I'm becoming more of an original fic person now anyway. ^_^

Probably my first Gerard Way Fanfiction, entitled A Kiss And I Will Surrender.

Oh, dear Lord, it was just.. :XD

The most surprising thing was that even though it was my worst, it got the most feedback (positive!) out of any of my stories.

Kind of sad. :tehe:

It was a mindless self indulgence fan-fic
it just didn't work at all, grammar was bad... just awful ):

The first... six or seven chapters of I'm Sorry, Joey. Especially the beginning. >.> They just make no damn sense and contradict the rest of the story.

Oh my gosh. There are so many I've written that are utter shit, but I'm thinking of one at this moment that I feel to share.

It was so awful! It was like, 13 vampire dudes varying from My Chemical Romance to Mr. Edward Cullen himself. I don't know what prompted me to write it, but it's complete shit.

It hurts to think about.

It's rare I'll actually write something I really really like.

But the worst is probably The Lights Spell Out a Code. It was way too intense and it was very repetitive. She got kidnapped twice, I think and it was just extremely farfetched, but at that time, it was my most popular story, and I couldn't understand why cause I thought it was shocking. So I did manage to finish it, although the last few parts were very forced, and I just killed everybody off in the end.

I do think I've written a few bad ones, but thats probably the one I think is the worst.

My worst story would be my very first fanfic. I wrote it when I was 15. It's a Sonny Moore fanfic (from From First to Last, at the time) and it's just...it's not very good. Very cliche.

I had a few stories on quizilla before it got all weird and shit. They were just... dear lord. I don't even know what was going on in my warped mind.
I used to write those teenie bopper stories about kids who only wore converse and wristbands with odd sayings on them.
Those kids who were so called "punk rock" and always had a starbucks in hand.

-head smack-

Thank goodness I discoverd mibba. This site saved me from myself.

The first version I wrote of Let's Paint This Town Red With Your Blood.
I re-wrote it in how I saw it now but if anyone read it before, it was creepy and blech.

my first story that I ever wrote. As Snow Falls On Desert Sky and it's sequel You Told Me This Gets Harder
when I first wrote them, I was quite impressed. But my writing has improved a lot since then, and I really hate them, but I can't bring myself to delete them.
Everything just happened too quick, and it was all...blah! If you get what I mean.
Although I hate them, I will never delete them, because it will let readers see how well I have improved since then, and it reminds me of that too.

here's the link if anyone's interested:

As Snow Falls On Desert Sky

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