Worst Story You've Written

  • RunningRIOTx

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    my worst story was the first real story i posted on Quizilla, it was called Panicking Tonight and it sucked out loud. :D It was a Ryan Ross fanfic.
    February 21st, 2009 at 02:58pm
  • Belle.

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    Vampire story.
    'Twas my first,
    and it sucked.
    Enough said.
    February 21st, 2009 at 05:28pm
  • Isabella.

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    My slash on here--deleted though cause it sucked.
    February 21st, 2009 at 06:55pm
  • chrissie.

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    Don't know if I said this already, but Like Fire.
    God, it was....horrible. :XD
    February 22nd, 2009 at 10:27am
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    The first story I posted on here, called 'Scream' which isn't done, but I got so sick of it. I think I could do so much better than what I produced with this story. I think I might take it down, change everything, plot, characters, I'm not sure.

    Yeah, I think, when I'm ready, I'll take it down and do a mega edit.
    March 1st, 2009 at 07:00am
  • Isabella.

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    Vampire Child—deleted. Too cliché :grr:
    March 1st, 2009 at 06:04pm
  • soft rains.

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    I may have said it before, but the first fan fic I wrote was the worst.
    It was a Patrick Stump fic with all the cliches you could possibly thing of.
    It was just horrific. :XD
    March 1st, 2009 at 07:08pm
  • xTeddyBear_Massacre

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    I'm about to delete my Frank Iero story called "Headphones on Your Heart" because I... Just... Don't... Like it... It's so terrible! It makes me want to cry. I wrote it on a whim and it was a very bad whim... But I don't like deleting stories without even giving them a chance, so I'm trying to ride it out... for now... =[
    March 3rd, 2009 at 09:18pm
  • KittyGrimm

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    Prep School With MCR.

    It was completly random, written on MSN with a friend. Weird plot, terrible grammar. It sucks majorly but I love it either way.
    March 3rd, 2009 at 09:51pm
  • pearl.

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    This is one of my first times on the forums!
    Yay for my loser self!

    I had these horrid stories on Quizilla. I thought they were brilliant but they were terrible.

    They were filled with pictures and were so over the top.

    I gave the account to my sister and I believe they are still up.
    'When I Close My Eyes' Joe Jonas fan-fiction -_-. 'It Takes Two' Jonas Brothers fan-fiction -_-.

    I still like the one shot on there though.
    March 12th, 2009 at 06:12am
  • Baked Potato

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    The story I had to write for my 7th grade literature class was absolutely horrible.
    It was written from the point of view of a teenager in diary form. The plot was cliche', the characters undeveloped and shallow, and just ugh.
    I try to pretend it didn't happen. :XD
    March 12th, 2009 at 07:38am
  • euclid.

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    This horrible little fan fic, I suppose, based off of Legend of Zelda that I attempted to write back in...fourth grade? XD It had a plot, but all the things leading up to it just did not tie together, the bad guy was just...really crap. And the way Link beat him was just...I can't even remember how, but I know it was simple, easy, and not interesting whatsoever.

    It was an assignment for school, so when I got the draft back, my teacher told me to rewrite the whole thing, not using Legend of Zelda. :lmfao
    March 12th, 2009 at 07:43am
  • Baked Potato

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    ^ OhGod. You wrote fanfiction about Legend of Zelda? :lmfao
    And think I had to rewrite my story, too. I feel so sorry for my Literature teacher. :XD
    I also think that my first Inuyasha fanfiction was horrible. It was about Inuyasha's children coming to our school and being BFFs with us. :XD

    Edit: Oh! It included Naraku's son, too. His name was Daraku. Creative, right?
    March 12th, 2009 at 07:49am
  • Takanori Matsumoto.

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    The worst thing I've ever created was this story called Tourniquet, and yeah. The title was cool, and two years ago, so was the idea. But it was on fictionpress, and it has since been deleted....but it was just a terrible 'I miss you, I wish you hadn't left me, I feel emo' cliche piece of crap.
    March 12th, 2009 at 09:03pm
  • pierrot the clown.

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    Posted? Atomic Holes. D:
    It's horrible, no one gets it but me.

    There's these two fanfics I never posted, though. Back in the day where I still wrote het. One was supposed to be about the children of the members of MCR (the latter had all died mysteriously). They supposedly had never been told about their fathers nor MCR, and then one day they find out and try and investigate the murders. Yeah... it was much worse than it seems. And it seems terrible already.
    March 13th, 2009 at 11:22pm
  • southpaw

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    Back in sixth grade when I was busy worshipping Fall Out Boy, I wrote a "story" that never ended up finished called Role Model. It was about a kid who had crappy foster parents, and his sister beat him up, and then his sister killed himself, and somewhere along the way his best friend got Fall Out Boy concert tickets. Then, he learns that Pete Wentz is his freakin' uncle. Then, somebody actually told me that it was the worst story they'd ever read, and then I stopped it.
    March 23rd, 2010 at 11:39pm
  • carcinogenic.

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    My first band fanfiction was actually worse than my early stuff. XD The only good things I can say about it are that it didn't actually fall into the typical MCR cliches, and that it had a pretty cool element of magical realism, kind of spooky and inexplicable. Otherwise though, it was soooo bad. :'3 Frank's dad used to hit him, and he had an on-again, off-again relationship with his boyfriend, Gerard... then Gerard started hitting him, then disappeared for a bit, then eventually Frank shot and killed him in a parking lot in front of the rest of the band. Then Frank went to Bert, Gerard's ex who he originally hated, confessed to him, and they bonded and then Frank went on the run and got taken advantage of or raped by pretty much everyone he met. I think eventually he called Mikey and Ray and they went and got him and he was super fucked up. I don't even know what happened after that. X'D

    I seriously wish I hadn't lost it, because I'd really like some mibbians to laugh at it with me. I'll never stop loving it for getting me into internet writing though. :']
    March 23rd, 2010 at 11:47pm
  • legacy .

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    Because I Like It Like That.
    Facepalm

    A Twilight fanfic.
    It's just .. horribly written.
    I'm currently re-writing the sequel so it's not as horrid, but I don't think I'll ever get the nerve to tackle that one.
    Just... no.
    March 23rd, 2010 at 11:58pm
  • Shannon McFarland

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    I am ashamed of the things I wrote as a kid, but if I didn't write them, then I wouldn't be where I am today. I think the things that I wrote terribly are the pieces that helped me find who I am as a writer now.
    March 24th, 2010 at 01:14am
  • folie a dru.

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    As far as in the last five years, where I've actually really liked my writing, it would probably be "Candy Hearts" or "Rage and Love". They're both Green Day fics. I didn't even post "CH" on Mibba. It's a four-part story and rather trite and short bullshit. It's a series of letters. And it just makes me want to gag.

    "Rage & Love" was an interactive story on the GSB boards years ago. Mainly because I killed characters too much, so if they reviewed I wouldn't kill characters. It had so many near-death scenes due to this, so way too much drama and no cohesive plot. (And then I killed them anyway. tehe)
    March 24th, 2010 at 03:08am