Worst Story You've Written

  • Evil.Red.Head

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    My worst story has to be when I was first starting out. It never had a title but it was a fan fiction with the Power Rangers and Hanson. In my own defense I was only 14 at the time so I have an excuse. Almost 200 pages handwritten (this is before I had a computer) I actually still have the story in a black 3 prong folder. It's something I never threw away but it will never see the light of day...ever.
    October 20th, 2010 at 08:21am
  • Rango

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    It was a Miroku story that was over 100 pages written. It was more for me and my friend to read, not to upload but I still hate it when I think about it.

    It was full of Mary-sue, Sango hatred, and unbelievable cliches. There were some things I got right and enjoyed reading at the time, but then again the other things just make me cringe. I'm not TOO ashamed of the sentence structures and what not, since it was a pretty long time ago, but if I typed the way I did in that story now, I'd be horribly ashamed.
    October 21st, 2010 at 03:25am
  • Penelope Kay

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    well, I've only written two stories, so insulting the one I'm writing now would be not-so-good but the first one I wrote was a good idea and ended up having a really cool ending but it wasn't written well, because really whose first story is?
    October 22nd, 2010 at 04:42am
  • chum

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    The first real story I wrote was called Those Stupid Little Quirk and it was a Pete Wentz story. The main character was Brendon Urie's little sister, her name was Raine, she was really ~~hardcore and the story took place during Warped Tour. There are too many cliches to count.
    October 22nd, 2010 at 08:45pm
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    Say Goodbye Hollywood, which used to be posted here but I deleted it because it was never finished. The last update was in like...2007.

    Gerard Way gets kidnapped, finds his kidnapper attractive, yadda yadda yadda...

    If you ever needed a place to find every cliche possible, that story was it.
    October 23rd, 2010 at 06:52pm
  • Teenage Dirtbag.

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    Inseperable, hands down. It's a Nick Jonas fic I wrote for a friend. I enjoyed writing it, but I've realised that I suck at writing anything vaguely romantic/non-depressing. I cringe whenever I read it because it's so bad. Shifty
    October 25th, 2010 at 06:05pm
  • Elizabette Pierre

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    ... I can't even.
    It was horrible; an Adam Lambert fan fic on Quizilla. First thing I ever posted. Grammar issues, punctuation, most TOTALLY spelling errors.
    Not to mention, it was so confusing and almost cliche. o.o'
    I was about ten or something. I forget. But I think it was kinda good because it would've had potential if it was beta-ed and everything. File It was so stupid, though. I go back and read it just to laugh my ass off, some times. lmfao
    November 27th, 2010 at 02:51am
  • SweetLilBabyGirl

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    My first didn't have a name. All I knew was that it sucked. It was a mixture of X-Men with Twilight, a bit of Cheaper By The Dozen and - how can I forget - effin Superheros! What was wrong with me??
    November 28th, 2010 at 12:54pm
  • Distraction_Fox

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    Most of my fics are pretty... yeah.
    But my worst is a tie between my first ever piece of (serious) writing which was a Harry Potter fan-fic (did NOT post on here) and, probably, my random MCR gender-swap fic... if anyone else think one of them is worse than that, please correct me

    I started writing when I was 12/13 and I'm 15 now... Don't really like my own writing much and have A LOT of room for improvement. I'll be the first to admit.
    November 30th, 2010 at 01:07pm
  • StayPerfect

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    I can't even remember what it was called but I posted it on Buzznet, and it was my first fanfiction. It was Pete Wentz and it went on forever! I made a sequel and everything and there were way too many cliche's in it. I deleted it off my computer but I'm curious and need to go back and read it.

    My First ever piece of writing was abysmal. It was just Facepalm
    November 30th, 2010 at 01:26pm
  • totheark.

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    Oh Lord. Every single fanfic I ever wrote XD I can't write fanfics. I'm so glad I finally realized that.

    They were about Green Day and they were the most cliché things ever. I'm not joking - it was the whole shibang. Girl who's from an abusive family yet is still H4RDC0R3 and badass, happens to bump into Billie Joe Armstrong who's conviniently single and OMFG IT'S LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT.

    Facepalm I'm so ashamed.
    November 30th, 2010 at 03:50pm
  • artaamx

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    "The Girl is a Catastrophe" - No plot. Under original fiction, but it's mostly ranting if I were to be honest. :shame:
    December 1st, 2010 at 01:44am
  • arwen undomiel

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    I just found my old Quizilla account...I was terrible. The oldest story there was a really bad Draco Malfoy fic, first chapter was posted on the 5th January 2008, meaning I was 11. It's just...rushed and cliche and...God. I have a Mikey Way and a Gerard Way fic there, too. I can't stop myself from reading them now. Oh well, it'll give me something to laugh at.

    EDIT: I stand corrected, the oldest thing is a terrible, terrible Gerard Way fic, posterd on the 11th of February 07. I was ten. It's worse than the Draco Malfoy one.
    December 1st, 2010 at 04:57pm
  • awake and alive;

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    I have way too many to even count!
    I'd have to say My Heart Is Yours.
    Josh Farro, random character, teen pregnancy. Complete...shiz...I'm quite happy I stopped and deleted it. I began when I was...eleven or twelve?
    December 4th, 2010 at 09:00am
  • voidoids

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    I regrettably wrote an ancient Draco Malfoy story on Quizilla back when I was 11. Now I didn't regret the Draco Malfoy part, I just wrote it terribly. I'd just started out then, and the title didn't even make sense to me, Secret's Legacy. It was messy, strayed from the main point, and to top it all off; the main character was a scene girl. Never mind the fact that they probably didn't even exist in the 90s.
    December 5th, 2010 at 04:17pm
  • Honeybear

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    My worst was definitely my first fanfiction; a Jonas Brother's story on Quizilla called...dun-dun-dun: "Torn Between Two".

    The lead character's name was Jessica. (I posted a photo of Taylor Momsen to portray her, this was before she had gone "grunge/goth" on the world). Her father was the president of Hollywood Records, which actually led my readers into thinking I was Jessica, and that the whole thing was a true story. They would say things, like: "OMG, I swear I won't use you to get to the famous people you know! Wanna be friends?"

    I was 11, I was obsessed, and I had way too much free-time on my hands. I never finished the story, I was literally only a chapter or two away from the ending, which pretty much sucked. I had even started the sequal to it.

    It was amazing, though. I had a lot of readers who would message me & bother me about updating it. I loved every second of it, even if the story was terrible and had no real plot/point.
    December 27th, 2010 at 09:21am
  • Cash..

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    My worst stories were probably the first three I ever written, and they're all pretty equally bad. Risks was just based off this crush that I met on Gamepony's Slasher game thing. The Peyton Games, was an odd somewhat different than the Hunger Games. On Top Of The World, was just a child's dream to be loved and liked in the world. They were all fantasy stories, which I hoped everyday to come true, I placed myself as the main character for like all of them. I thought maybe that one of them might come true. I was wrong, of course. They all had these terrible planned out characters, different problems for every chapter, and a kind of a lot of sex scenes. Most likely I was around 12 when I wrote these stories, hehe.
    December 31st, 2010 at 08:02am
  • whatsmyusername?

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    This story about superheroes. One person had super speed, and then broke their legs or something. They got their powers from some guy in the woods that smelled like rotting fish. Worst. Story. Ever.
    December 31st, 2010 at 09:12pm
  • Icamane Hatake

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    I have a new worst story.

    I've decided it's my worst because I wrote it way after I started writing, so I was certainly competent enough to write a decent story, yet this thing was awful. I don't even want to say the name because it's so embarassing, but it was almost a fanfic of my life. I wrote it during my freshman year of high school when I was having a lot of emotional problems and it was just... awful Facepalm I'm ashamed I ever wrote it.
    January 1st, 2011 at 04:00am
  • southpaw

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    As far as what's posted on the site, my worst story is a toss-up between The Mighty Mosh and Reality Check. Both are annoying, repetitive, and just really stupid. Facepalm But I can't bring myself to delete either of them, since a few people have apparently enjoyed them.

    ...I can't even remember the main character's name in Reality Check. XD (I want to say Dalton, or...Dylan, or something...) But he's annoying as crap, and I tried to make him a brat with a possible sweet side, but he just comes across as pathetic and pretentious.
    December 27th, 2011 at 03:36am