- druscilla; daydream.:
- I'll just write two paragraphs for each thing I'm describing.
You're standing there. You're shivering. You're staring up at me with expectant eyes. I hold my arms out and you crawl into my lap.
And...
You're so beautiful. They watch you with hungry eyes. You're the prettiest thing they've ever seen. Their fingers run over your arms, your eyes, your hair, your face, your stomach. You're their demigod, Jesus sent for their sins. And they love you.
Are they both second person?
Yeah, those are both second person.
The first one less so, but still second. It's sort of both points. The reason it's second is because when your reader is reading it, they're putting themselves in the pov of "you" whereas you, the author, are putting yourself in the pov of "me/I". Does that make any sense? And like Emily said... I could be completely wrong too.