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thanks for the story comment! :D

well hi :)

well i'm sure if you practice enough you'll get it down(:

Thank you for the poem comment. I'm glad you liked it. It was one of my older ones but it was still good. ^^

we don't have a name, still working on that too.
haha.
we also don't have a myspace or facebook, we're not going to make one until we're absolutely sure we want to go through with it.

yeah.
well we're kind of a work in progress.
it's more of an experiment to see if we really want this.

oh cool.
i think i've been there a couple of times....
haha.
that's nice(:

yeah, i guess.
that's awesome, what part of australia are you from?
i'm into hardcore screamo.
ha.
and you?
i'm india by the way(:

hahah no problemo!Im excited to see where it goes!

No problem! i can't wait for you to write more :)

no thanks needed it a good story....hiya im desi!

Thank you for the poetry comment. :]

you're welcome! :]

Emma smellllls! =) xx

Your so welcome! Your story is just so good! I hardly ever comment on anyone's story unless it's a good one. (:

HEY HEY I UPDATED!

Thank you very much for commenting :]

Yumm (:

I love it too :D I go all the time, haha.

Pretty good (:

yupp im a dinosaur!
you better watch out, i might eat you ;)

haha. hey.

Oh god, totally disregard that then. I had a complete brain lapse and thought you were the author of another William Becket story that I follow that has a lot of completely random/insane twists in it. Sooo, in other words, a lot of that feedback/comment does not apply xD I do think, like you said, building up Will a little more wouldn't be a bad idea though.
But, now that I know which story you do like - and that I love, I still hold fast to my belief that you prob. have one of the most original/believable settings of all the rest and that's really tough to achieve.
Sorry for being retarded and sending you an irrelevant and long response earlier.