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xD Well, like. When you meet someone or know someone for an extended period of time, like they've known each other, you tend to realize certain warning signs or little habits. A few times in this story I've just been like 'wtf, where did this come from?" because the characters have been built up in a really certain way and then something crazy just happens. Like when Will tried stabbing Alex and stuff. So, like, even if it's just a sentence or tiny details spread around the story so that certain people may or may not pick up on it , will help build up a sort of other side to them so when they do go crazy and try to kill someone it won't seem out of the blue or w/e.
Idk if I'm describing it right, xD. giving more DEPTH to them. showing more of their thoughts, more human emotions (like, reasoning, rationalizing, feeling guilty, holding grudges and that kind of stuff. Like, if someone you loved/used to love tried killing someone you liked - would you take them back? Would you forget about someone you loved for 4 years and get over that relationship/fall in love with someone in a few hours or a few days.)
That kind of thing?

I love your stories!!! Specially the WB one =D when are you going to update?!?

Oh Yay!
*hugs back*
I'm going to check it out right now.

You're Welcome! =]
Um, which story did you update?
I'm reading more that one of your stories.

no prob :) I am really interested.HEHE.I like stories that are really original! ;D

Thanks for the story comment :)

You're added. (:

Thanks for the story comment :) And I'm totally with you on falling hard for boys I can't have :( hehe.

Thanks again!

I appreciate the story comments!

Heyy, I don't think I've ever commented your stories before but that's okay because I'm a pretty new reader of beckett stories and, therefore, yours too!
I'm excited that I got an update for my birthday and absolutely love your story "cause it makes no sense at all." Beating out like 99.8% of all stories I've ever read, your story turns what could very very very possibly be a rehash of a plot/story that has been very very very over-told and gives it a completely new spin and changes, separates even, it completely. It's so unique, well written and cute and just gahh.
Anyway, I hope you keep writing and updating <3
oh and, crazy authors notes aren't really that crazy, lol. I think that kind of thing happens to every girl and we either don't feel as insane when we read it or completely understand. If you need an anonymous ear to vent to I'm always here :]

Hey. i just updated my story. I'm going to start writing much shorter chapters so I can post more often. I'm enjoying your story so far. I hope to see more.

aww! it's nice to know some people are excited for updates *grins* =]

thankies for the poem comment. lol what made you laugh?

thanks for the story comment!
your friends will be devastated?
xo

No problem. :]
I think it's because he apologizes so much. I personally don't care much for apologies.

aww thanks for the story comment!
glad you like it =]
xo

it's ok! -hug- :] you can do it!

I'm sure it would be a bit difficult to understand, but you have to remember it is said in the first person perspective. It is the character telling the story through his own thoughts. So, in turn, his mind is telling you what he did before the action he is doing. For example, he's already lunged forward so he is now going for a stab. That is how he is telling it. Almost in real time if you would like to think of it that way.

It is better ^_^ I like your story. Please do continue it. Need any help? You can always ask me if you'd like. I left a comment on the story. Also I would like it if you could possibly read my story Chronicles of the Accursed One: Fatal Ties. It would be nice to have some constructive criticism myself. ^_^ I hope to read more!

Tis alright Emma m'dear =) xx