I think you were totally right about it needing the second chapter. We've gotten three more readers since, a subscriber, and a comment. This may be a well receipted story. :):)
Mmkay. I want to tell you what chapter at least one of the hints is in, but I'm afraid if I tell you where to look you'll figure it out.... more hints will be dropped though.
It's hard to remember where things are when I'm already so far ahead. Writing the 15th chapter now.
Yeah, that's totally what she does in her spare time. I keep forgetting that you have no idea what's going to happen. Hahaha. That seems so strange to me since we've been sharing everything for pretty much a year now. lol