So ya saying my comment was 100% pointless :[ SNIFFLES
oh my gosh, you should go and check it out, it's about shadows following this girl, and they make her say weird and do bad things, she provoked them so bad this one time, she killed a boy. YEA IT GOOD,M then she gets sent to a teenager institution, she she meets some jackass there, but they fall in love in the end xD
ANYWAYS, YOUR BOOK WAS AH-MAZE-ING
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Oh I take advice whenever I can get it haha. I know a lot of people get butt hurt because they're used to hearing how perfect their stories are. I read mine out loud to my older sister who will sit and criticize every single word so I don't mind. I can't take her advice seriously though because she's the type that needs like half a page to understand one paragraph, like that much detail needs to be put in for her ha. Anyway, I love advice so whenever you wanna give it I'll take it :)
At least you weren't trying to be mean when you said I was blunt with details. I can be, I know. I think sometimes if there's less talked about, people want to read it more to find out things.
Right now I have to figure things out for it, but I hope you'll keep reading.
I have made Mia and Elvis (Who is now officially Gabriel) each three years older and her speech has been fixed so she does seem like it makes sense for her to talk the way she did. I have also researched the match issue and the first matches began to appear in Europe around 1530 and I've set a date in the first chapter. Pretty much fixed everything :) I also explained how Mia could recognize the knight as well. :)
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Well, I guess the North isn't for everybody. XD You know they call me Yankee at school down here. Or did, when I still went to school. I found it pretty unfair because I wasn't allowed to make Civil War references because I was warned some people are still pissed they lost the war and they'd most likely actually shoot me, or at least beat me up, if I said anything about it. D: