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Hey jus started reading your arranged marriage to the mafia story, spend all night completing it, well up the to second 2 last chapter in the sequel. I love your story, so interesting nd your an amazing writer. I was nearly going to go into mourning when i was under the impression that Ethan had actually died. Really hope you can upload the last chapter, that would be really awesome. (:

Hey! Do u now when and if you'll be completing Married to the Mafia?

hey love! how you been? haven't heard from you in a while & i'm just checking up in your well being(;

The problem was that you said "Marson Samuel's" I don't know why I thought it was multiple errors, I think i commented on the wrong story or something. XD Very sorry

No problemo! Thats what im here for. But seriously never doubt your writing skills, your really good. Just be positive :D

awesome

I NEED you to update Married to the Mafia... like... nowish. I'm dying!!

the heat= on of life's very UNnecessary things lol

oh you live in the bottom of the earth? lol still is nice though, i wouldnt mind having some of those beaches<3 have you heard of the oil spill? well all the oil washed up on our shore haha pretty disgusting! Thats terrible!! burns are generally horrible. They were trying to show how hot it is i think in qatar it was & somebody cracked an egg on a car metal bumper during noon & the egg actually starting cooking from heat....

Tomorrow is the new year, well the new year is in 2 hours here so its like already 5 over there (maybe different, depending on where you live) i hope you havent partied to hard- scratch that i hope you partied very hard enough for me & you lol & i hope you seen the best fireworks & such. I hope 2011 is better than all the past years for you(:

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no its not, its really not much at all. Its beyond hot here, & not good tropical hot lets go for a swim hot but going to the hospital to treat my heat wave hot lol

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i hope this is the last of times for a long long while you see one again(:
they can only be fun for so long lol

Im in saudi arabia, born & raised there but moved to the US 5 years ago.

& ahh thank you<3 same goes to you! have fun in beach & your hot weather(;
& its no problem, you deserve them & more love(:

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im glad your ok!! & oh god, im sorry! i remember last year you had to get a surgery too right? but im glad you got this done, i know t can get dangerous & you can suffocate in your sleep... its good your great & back(:

me? im also good & out the country lol so excuse me if i reply too late or comment late on a chapter.

Have a merry Christmas & a great new year<3

should i be worried about your existence?

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same here(:
& sometimes the writes give u a little background on the story & i like that, like how they came up with the characters name or story & such.

i think those ppl write for the feedback not for themselves & not bcus they like it. Yeah its nice hearing ppl thoughts & everything but do it bcus u enjoy it not otherwise. nah i dont think its silly, i mean u need determination & will give you that & that just shows how dedicated u are:D

its crime really haha its a challenge to get out of bed everyday. but no matter how much i LOVE sleep i like the world in the morning, its just so... peaceful & everybody is in their own world its so nice no drama & nothing to worry about.

really? your not liking uni? most people say uni is better bcus much more freedom & whatever but i think high school is less responsibility. our classes are from 7 to 2, its that early bcus alot of kids work after school & if we got out earlier there hours would just be crazy. you work at a newspaper right? it must be quite an experience! shows how much u like writing(: plus you get $$ for it, that should be enough right? lol

i think thats so retarded. s&g are the least important things in writing u have micro word for that. what matters is the plot & characters & how u portray them. plus its not like u have mistakes in EVERY damn sentence! you hardly even have mistakes, if you know how to write a sentence in the English language ur off the hook lol

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I really do enjoy reading a/n besides the fact that they're important I like to get to know the person behind the writer u kno? & I always read them before the chapter to brace myself haha. I mean I would hate to be so confused thinking its the end....

Editing is a pain in the ass. I sometimes skip it too grammar & spelling mistakes won't kill anyone! & after a while its hard to find them bcus first of all if u wrote the chapter u know what its gonna say so when I go back & edit I can catch the mistakes the first time but after that when I can recite the chapter & my eyes are used to it I can never find them. What's worse is I will go back like a month later & read over the chapter & see the most ridculous mistakes. I always mess up 'he's' & 'his' & I would just find random words in the middle of the sentence......

7? Oh good god!! I mean I'm forced to wake at 5:30 for school but if I had a choice like work, I would pick a job around noon!!

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bad mistake bcus i was like WTF how is this story over? she must have smoked something before posting haha

oh thats the system ha? i start writing in my third period than go before i sleep (on my phone) than i edit on my computer & post. i do it prettty late too bcus i spent so much time on editing i think i have ADD i can never focus on one thing...

thats pretty great waking up to love, what a great way to start a morning!

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i understand its a thing u HAVE to do, we all have that. i just meant they dont have to perfect just this time haha but dont worry they were perfect.

& oh yeah, u always update pretty late like around 11 right? bcus ur 17 hours ahead (good god that alot) & its always 5 in the morning here when u do...

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I PROMISE you no one is gonna care about the lyrics right now, that gonna happen is too crazy.

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hahah i love how when u say ur gonna post u dont do it but when u never mention when ur gonna update u do it quick nah just kidding u actually always stick it to it! but i mean from ALL the chapters u picked to be a bad person did it have to be this one? just to throw it out there... IM DYING OVER HERE!!

oh god, who does NOT want to see them? one of the world wonders.

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Okay, I just have to tell you something. Your story [i]Married To The Mafia...?[/i] is not a story I would read. Ever. BUT, I read the prequel in one day. Seriously, I never sit still for that long. So basically my point is that you should update. Cuz I [b]need[/b] to know what happens next.

*sorry for the late reply* you could have not put that in a better way i swear!! its so beyond fuckin true!!! though i dont think its nice, they are so oblivious & ignorant & look down on people. Its ridiculous. Im not trying to be mean or anything but they are so… not educated!! I remember I was talking about Hawaii & this boy was like ‘oh so you left the country, did u have to get papers or something?” & the teacher over heard him & was like ‘sweetie Hawaii is part of the united states’ I mean at least know your own country right? & that’s another thing, you live across the globe but literally have las vegas down to science, from the description I sometimes wonder if you live there!!

Where I live, we have as many Mexicans & black ppl as white so I thank god for that, otherwise I would definitely be a loner haha I don’t mean all white people are that bad but gosh… I have no words for it lol
& I bet!! It’s a plus that u have beautiful beaches u know? They’re not polluted &all that mess! If you don’t mind me asking which part are u from/live in? must be a city since u go to uni & everything.

That’s one of my dreams in life, it seems like such a life experience!! I actually have a friend from Melbourne that’s going to france under exchange after the summer break & the new semester starts! We’ll get lost in NY together ok? Sure, americans are damn oblivious but I cant deny they have beautiful cities<3

No wow to that!! I bet the first word you learned was ocean right? Lol. Bali is such a beautiful place, that must have been quite the vacation. All of Indonesia is pretty tho it’s a shame they get all those natural disasters. Thailand is one of the places my parents & bro went to alone. They say its CHOAS but beautiful nonetheless, did u like it? It’s very… cultured right? Lol

Those are great travels!! I have seen some of the US & Europe but I gotta expand on Asia! Really? that’s great!! So if you wanna travel Europe your all set bcus of the EU. Citizenship, visas & passporst are one of life hardships I swear, you do NOT want to deal with them.

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