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  • Des

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    Whenever I get the chance I'll definitely do it. It just didn't fit in the last chapter I put up, you know? Lol.
    And thank you. :D
    May 23rd, 2010 at 11:57pm
  • Des

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    Aw thank you :D That's awesome. And I was thinking about putting the explanation for that in the next chapter. We'll see lol.
    I like your profile btw. :)
    May 23rd, 2010 at 05:17am
  • fooleish

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    I think after my exams I might take down the current chapters and start over because I'll have more free time and I'll be more motivated to write it when it's all pretty and sunshiney outside. (Hopefully.)
    But yeah. I'll definitely try to get it done soon because otherwise I'll just forget about it totally and shove it into that folder entitled 'Shitty stories I will never ever touch ever again'. Ack.
    May 19th, 2010 at 03:16pm
  • fooleish

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    Thanks for the story comment. :)
    I know what you mean about all the characters and stuff. I've kinda abandoned that story because it changed into something I didn't want it to be and it was too late for me to fix it.
    I'm honestly trying to write an update but it's just not working for me. The story's kinda dead. I might take it down and rewrite it, though, because I did love the original plot. It just sort of... died.
    Thanks for the concrit, though. It's helpful 'cause if I do rewrite it, I know exactly what to fix. There is a lot.
    May 17th, 2010 at 07:08pm
  • Kimm

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    you gotta play it cool
    blend in with the walls
    karate chop the security guards
    JUMP ONTO THE SET AND RUN THROUGH IT LIKE THE WIND SHOUTING WOOOOO!!!!
    lol jk,:)
    May 16th, 2010 at 06:31pm
  • Nobody's Girl.

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    Aha thanks for the comment! :") xx
    May 16th, 2010 at 10:39am
  • Kimm

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    Dude.
    I would like...
    ditch class and jump into the set everytime they say action
    like
    WOOOO!!!! "cut!"
    lol :)
    May 15th, 2010 at 04:52am
  • Kimm

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    D: THEY FILMED WHAT AT YOUR SCHOOL?
    I'M COMING THERE!! lol
    May 14th, 2010 at 11:22pm
  • sccrg815

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    Thanks for your comment on Deceived! I really appriciate it. I was starting to think no one was reading it. lol

    Is that a good thing or bad thing though that you forgot? lol

    Thanks again,
    Stephanie
    May 9th, 2010 at 09:34pm
  • Howl

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    Only saw your comment on my profile now. I'll edit that part tomorrow. Thank you once again! I really should take more notice of these things
    May 9th, 2010 at 09:30pm
  • Howl

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    Thanks for pointing that out. Do you think I should put that part where he thinks in italics or something like that?
    May 9th, 2010 at 09:26pm
  • Howl

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    I rewrote that chapter I told you about. I hope it's better. And I updated the story itself. Thanks for your advice!
    May 9th, 2010 at 05:41pm
  • SkyLyte

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    Okay, that's awesome.
    May 7th, 2010 at 02:33am
  • SkyLyte

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    I absolutely love your profile. The bedroom is sooooooo cute. Your icon pic, who is that? The icon pic is really cute!!! Cheers!!!!
    May 7th, 2010 at 02:13am
  • Des

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    Thank you! :)
    May 6th, 2010 at 04:59am
  • Howl

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    Thank you for the comment! I actually want to take out the part about his dream...It went againt the grain for me to write something like that and I want to keep the story as clean as possible. -_-' Do you think I should remove and replace it with something else?
    May 5th, 2010 at 04:34pm
  • Howl

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    I updated Summer Stars, just a heads up in case you're still following it. I hope you like it!
    May 2nd, 2010 at 10:50am
  • Des

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    Yea, some of those things didn't seem to fit for me either but at the time I couldn't think of a better way to write the sentence.

    And I feel better about the whole "grandma's offering" thing too. I just kind of threw it in there before.

    Thanks for the comment!
    March 29th, 2010 at 04:44am
  • Des

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    Thanks for the tips. :) And the compliments :)
    March 25th, 2010 at 05:11am
  • Eoix

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    mm.
    i finally got your comment after such a long time.
    well, all i can say is that's what it was meant to be, i guess.
    typical, boring.
    it's what people liked at the time and i was satisfied with that.
    i guess that's all i can say.
    you shouldn't have read it if you didn't like it, i guess.
    -shrugs-
    i dunno.
    i haven't been on mibba in forever.
    reading back all my old stories makes me feel stupid XD
    March 17th, 2010 at 06:15am