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Thank you for the advice. I definitely didn't catch those. And I'm stumped too. I'm really no good at titles. D:

I read the Matchmakers Promise. Was that the one you were talking about? It was sweet, but I like B+B stories darker, with a sinister twist.

Thank you for reading Their Story! Yes, I have a weird method of capilisation...I understand vot joo meant yesh. Your third favourite? Were the first two, books or stories on mibba? If the former then where can I find zem pwease? ^_^ My all time favourite B+B story was Beauty by Robin Mckingley and my 2nd was Beastly by Alex Flinn. Awesome writers. I have both their books. Eish! Too much babbling! (scuttles off)

I've reread and re-edited that story for the past five years! Gah! And everytime I read it I notice more and more mistakes. Capitilisation? Give me an e.g. of where I went wrong, I ish not clear on zat point. Did I put a small letter on a e.g. day of the week or for a name???

Critique away. As an artist I've had it for years and I take it, but as a writer I still have to get used to it. Why not now? Take note though that my Summer Stars story is purely for fun whilst my stories like Their Story I take seriously and might publish one day...So read Summer Stars with a pinch of salt and enjoy the absurdities if you can!

Thanksh for da comment on Summer Stars and Reading in the Rain! A new commenter! And new reader? Are joo? Eh? Lovesh yer profile! Hope you stick around and enjoy future Summer Stars chapters! I'll be on the lookout for your comments. Cheerios

Oh thank you so much. ^^

Well, I'm glad you enjoyed the little I wrote.

Thanks for the story comment, however, I've kinda "dropped" the story, and might most likely never be finished.

Sorry for the late reply.
I feel the same. For a while I'd been hating the way I've written it. It's not clear at all. Either I'll rewrite some, or all, or just delete it. Thank you for your opinion, I really appreciate it. :)

Hey, thanks for the comment, :). I love your profile, BTW.

Thanks for commenting, more will be coming today or tommorow.
I am glad you like it :)

Next chapter is up now if you wanted to read it. :D

Thanks for the story comment !
Do you want me to let you know when the next chapter comes ?
xx

Thank you for the story comment. :)

Thank you for the honest criticism. I feel the exact same way. I feel it has gone down a lot. I also hate the title but it was all I could think of at the moment. I may rewrite it or just delete it - it's bugging me that much. Thank you.

Wow thnx for the story comment! It was actually constructive and I LUV hearing wut ur really thinking :D thnx for reading

I'm the same with so many stories, thanks for the comment :D

You’re lucky. I can’t blend in [i]at all[/i]. The last day of school I felt like a freak because everyone was watching a movie, and I was sitting all by myself on one of the bleachers in the gym. The really sad thing is, my best friends from last year were sitting right in front of me, and didn’t bother to do anything but smirk… Haha, sometimes I hate people.

It didn’t feel much like Christmas to me, but I still enjoyed ir.

Yeah, she does. It was funny, too, because I was trying to help my Benvolio find a book (That Angus, Thongs, and Full Frontal Snogging… I don’t know if you’ve heard of it, the movie just came out a few weeks ago), yet when I told her the title of the book she about had a heart attack. =D . Everyone in the room was cracking up when she freaked out over it.

Haha, I suppose it’s small, but I like it better than the cities. With all those holes in the road (I can neve remember what they’re called…), the smoke in the air, and [i]huge[/i] buildings… It freaks me out a little, haha.

=D I made it. Immediately the teacher told me I would have a guaranteed spot, yet whether I would get the character I wanted is still undecided. She says she might want me to take on a bigger role.

His burps? You [i]must[/i] be crazy about him, haha. I wish I could have a steady relationship, which at the end of the message I’ll tell you what’s going on with that guy I told you about… The one with cute elbows, and who isn’t too smart.

Okay, haha. Sounds like you have a huge family.

I agree. My friend’s dad is around sixty, while his mom was under 30 when she married him. Sweet people, but you’d think she was his daughter, or granddaughter when you see them together.

The guy I like (Let’s call him…Ron.) got his schedule changed, so now he’s in my Comp. and Lit. And he chose a desk next to me. And, I spoke to him, haha. Actually, this jock was flirting with me and gave me Ron’s paper, so I had to give it back. He thought I had stolen his paper off his desk, so I had to explain the ignorant jock had given it to me. Then, during everyone’s free period on Wednesday, he sat across the room directly in front of me.

So, my friends kept giggling and all that, telling me he was staring at me, and then this whore came up and started bothering us about who we were talking about. Then, this other guy came up there and slung his arm around my shoulder, and started flirting with all of us, and Ron was literally glaring at him, haha. So, being the pathetic little freshman I am, I implied that I liked him with a friend over the phone, so he plans on talking about me with Ron…

Haha, I feel so pathetic. XD

How did you and your guy meet?

Hello. I'm just going around and thanking people who had commented on I Need You Like A Heartbeat. So yes, thank you very much for your comment(s). I have a new story ongoing and I hope you could check it out as well.

http://stories.mibba.com/read/225428/He-Caught-My-Eye/