Aw thank you :D That's awesome. And I was thinking about putting the explanation for that in the next chapter. We'll see lol.
I like your profile btw. :)
I think after my exams I might take down the current chapters and start over because I'll have more free time and I'll be more motivated to write it when it's all pretty and sunshiney outside. (Hopefully.)
But yeah. I'll definitely try to get it done soon because otherwise I'll just forget about it totally and shove it into that folder entitled 'Shitty stories I will never ever touch ever again'. Ack.
Thanks for the story comment. :)
I know what you mean about all the characters and stuff. I've kinda abandoned that story because it changed into something I didn't want it to be and it was too late for me to fix it.
I'm honestly trying to write an update but it's just not working for me. The story's kinda dead. I might take it down and rewrite it, though, because I did love the original plot. It just sort of... died.
Thanks for the concrit, though. It's helpful 'cause if I do rewrite it, I know exactly what to fix. There is a lot.
you gotta play it cool
blend in with the walls
karate chop the security guards
JUMP ONTO THE SET AND RUN THROUGH IT LIKE THE WIND SHOUTING WOOOOO!!!!
lol jk,:)
Thank you for the comment! I actually want to take out the part about his dream...It went againt the grain for me to write something like that and I want to keep the story as clean as possible. -_-' Do you think I should remove and replace it with something else?
mm.
i finally got your comment after such a long time.
well, all i can say is that's what it was meant to be, i guess.
typical, boring.
it's what people liked at the time and i was satisfied with that.
i guess that's all i can say.
you shouldn't have read it if you didn't like it, i guess.
-shrugs-
i dunno.
i haven't been on mibba in forever.
reading back all my old stories makes me feel stupid XD
And thank you. :D