it's based on reality :O and I've been really into writing it- hopefully it'll be over soon and I'll have some measure of closure...but I don't know how I'll feel about what's gonna happen to me if I turn it into a tragedy or a happy ending!
I felt like Ebony and Harry moved together too fast- especially because it wasn't the average hookup, given his experience. Or lack thereof ;] So I think we should backtrack
lol, not hard to guess. I'd probably like your character more in our story except my character's in there xD I'm editing through the chapters to make Ebony more bitchy and superficial- has to be some reason she's Draco's best friend. =] I need to interject something with the blood feud in there too though- I wouldn't let Draco call Hermione a "mudblood" because I think it's uncivilized and uncalled for, but I still believe that that's what she is. So- OH! Something like:
Ebony: *does something heartless and cruel*
Harry: Why are you doing this?! This isn't you!
Ebony: This [i]is[/i] me