Thanks for commenting! I wasn't really feeling this chapter, but I'm glad you still liked it regardless!
Yay! That's great that you can see her changing as a character. :) That's my goal!
Yeah, new to me, too! >__< I'm struggling so bad trying to figure out how to start TGL. O___o I have NO idea. Should I start with her, Cle, and Jor training? Or skip right to Kairi's birthday party? Or somewhere else completely?! *headdesk*
Yeah, I get that, but all the books are completely integrated with one another. They're not just a sequence of events. There are things in earlier books that set up later events, and if I don't plan it out ahead of time, I'd have to go back and do a lot of rewriting. The very first time I wrote TGL (Back then TGR) without planning, it was a mess. Most of the events didn't even line up with each other and there were a lot of plot holes. Even a rough outline to get the gist of what each book is about would help.
Thanks for the comment! :)
Ah, I think the hardest thing is that I don't know where the story should start, or how. :S I've been doing a lot of writing research, and everywhere I look says that a good novel establishes the setting, main character(s), and main conflict in the first few pages. I dunno how to do that with this story. X__X The main conflict is the war, but that doesn't begin officially until book 2... O.o Then the whole Beast thing... How could I lead into that in the first 3 pages?! Hrmph. >:(
Thanks for commenting! :D I'm extremely excited about the rest of the book, so I'll hopefully have another chapter soon. Though my midterm exams start up next week, so we'll see if I get some spare time to write.
Thanks for the comment! I'll try to update quickly! I'm very excited to be nearing the ending. :) I've got a couple plot holes to iron out, but then we shall be in business ^__^
Hehe, well we are glad to hear that! Her and I are actually going back and forth right now writing so as long as either of us are up, you should be getting updates.
I said this to myself as I was posting it. I think what I'll do is repost, with added *better* ending. I just wanted to put it out there and see what you guys thought, since it sucks to work hard on something and then scrap it when you're finished, you know? At least you liked everything but the cliffhanger, so yeah... :/
Thanks for the comment(s). Basically the whole story will bring up questions and then when they open up the time capsule/the ending, they'll be answered...