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I'm so sad you haven't written anything for Winter Nights ):

Awww! You are tooo sweet! That seriously means a lot :) I will definitely look into updating Adam 2.0 for you! But just so you know I probably won't get to it until like ....December.
Ugh, I know, I'm a terrible updater. But I'm swamped with work and my primary focus is school + this manuscript so I hope you won't mind the long wait!

Hey :)
Thanks so much for that sweet message! Unfortunately, I'm no longer putting my writing online anymore :( I'm working on a manuscript I'm hoping to publish so I won't be putting that on the internet because I'm paranoid someone might steal it haha. I might come back on Mibba to update a chapter or two, but I can't make any promises!
Out of curiosity, which story were you hoping to read more of? That way, I can prioritize that first! :D

:)) chiar ca ai dreptate!! romanii are all about partys!!!
mai ai cateva zile pana la scoala..imi pare rau pentru tine:))
din fericire deja am terminat cu scoala:)
nu am nici o poveste pentru ca nu sunt buna cu detaliile...adica stiu cum ar trebuie sa fie scrisa ca lumea sa-l citeasca doar ca nu am rabdare sa scriu fiecare parte mica cu detaliile cu tot...sa ma repet iar si iar! totusi cateodata am cate o idee foarte buna ca cum ar trebuie sa se sfarseasca sau despre ce ar trebuie sa fie vorba...poate ca o sa incerc candva:) acum doar citesc...din fericire sunt persoane cu talent si rabdare care scriu foarte frumos ca si tine!!:)

Thanks for your comment on my pic!! XD

Thank you so much for your comment on my journal. It helped me a lot. Thanks again!

Buna! acum am ajuns acasa de la mare! am fost am petrecut 10 zile acolo.a fost super tare!:)
Da matematica e foarte grea in Romania si nu numai. Eu am terminat clasa a doisprezecea pe profil matematica-informatica asa ca vorbesc din experienta!! toate materiile sunt "foarte importante" asa ca e foarte greu. si acuma ma chinui cu niste poezii.mai am un examen si termin de tot.da scoala se sfarseste pe 15iunie.si inceepe pe 15 septembrie...doar cei pe aclasa 12 termin mai repede pe 30mai.
si ti-a placut in Romania? mai vii?
spunemi ceva interesant.cu ce iti petreci timpul? mergi la concerte ceva?

I'll try to keep posting, but sometimes my incredible wit evades me and I have to stare at the computer screen for a day or two before words start to appear.

Hi, just wanted to thank you for the comment on my article :) I'm glad I could break it down into nice easy words, because I know how difficult it can be to understand things like that if you're not familiar with the subject already.

I agree that it is a very serious matter that people are just ignoring. People should be made aware, and things should be done to prevent it. I mean, we really are screwed if we just sit back and let it happen. I like informing my parents of what I learn at university, so they can hopefully take some sort of precaution so they don't get sick with something or whatever. I think it's great to help protect your friends and family. :) I think you shouldn't give up with trying to get the message through to your family. Hopefully one day they'll realise how important it is :)

Okay, first of all, I'm such a big fan of your story Winter Nights. I actually thought Cardboard Wings was an actual band! Hahahaha! I guess I kinda just expected Emma and Braxton to get together because they were already bangin' in Summer Nights! I don't think you should go back and make it less obvious, I think that it fit in quite perfectly! There's nothing that really bothers me with your story, I really like it. I would advise though, so read over what you wrote to fix some grammatical errors. I mean, obviously you can't fix every little details, but do read over what you wrote so that you can fix some things that might not make much sense to a reader. Other than that, you're doing great! Please update soon! :D

Da am fost la Cluj o data! am vizitat Gradina Botanica :)
nici mi-e nu-mi prea place matematica deci sunt la liceu pe profil matematica -informatica..
imi pare bine ca te-am gasit si am dat pe povestile tale faine:)
sper sa mai vorbim :)

Traiesc in Romania!! orasul Sighisoara!! ai fost pe aici?
tu de unde esti? din ce oras??
traiesti de mult timp afara?? :)

Da sunt din Romania si da vorbesc romaneste!!
nu pot sa cred ca e cineva pe site-ul acesta care vorbeste romaneste!!
tu mai stii pe cineva??
btw I really like your stories :)

Hi!
I just saw that your Romanian!! do you speak Romanian too??
I was so surprised that your from my country!
In 5 years your the first person that I meet on mibba and it's from Romania!
xoxo

It did indeed go by without an update, I am afraid. My health isn't brilliant this week as I am taking a hit. Tried writing yesterday but found it difficult so I gave up. I apologise for that but should be well enough to write again in a couple of days. Feeling stronger today already :3 Thank you for you patience o7

Nooo, complain if you wish to! I need those! The whole point is for me to improve on my writing. Can't improve if no one critices me ;_; But yeeeah, think the other readers were the same, shouting at Lyra not to eat. Lyra however is naive and not well versed in the world and only really relies on her magic to keep her safe, not her brain. Silly child. Glad you enjoyed the update though. And also glad that you miss Grigore, even if he is a bit of a git at the moment :3

Hey:) You commented on my new story, Sincerely Yours and I am SO happy you like it!! I took your criticisms and changed around the main picture and my layout and the "..." hahaha :D I had a really hard time finding pictures cause on google they have all these DARK pirate ship pictures and the castles look really super fake :P so finally I decided on what I have now. So let me know what you think ;) and I will be updating as soon as I possibly can! Thanks again for subscribing (: and comment whenever, I <3 feedback!!

I am sorry ;__; My parts do that sometimes. Some can be quite short, depending how I cover a point. My point was to vaguely introduce an new character and setting, which I did. So no reason to go on as the next part might be lengthy. Thankfully, the short parts are not common. But all the same, I thank you for your criticism. It is not often I get it so I appreciate it. Shall try and keep up this cliffhanger buisiness you seem to love/hate. :3

Haha, good :)
Obviously I'm a bit defensive, and I have certain things that I see differently than you. But it's nice that you took to time to write that all out. :)
Sunny-Lee <3

You weren't too harsh! It's completely fine. I totally understand what you were doing. I was just giving my own advice about future reviews :)
I actually really appreciate when people take the time to tell me where I could improve. So, it was helpful. So, don't feel bad :)
Sunny-Lee <3