thefreshpen / Comments

hey, i saw your post on one of my friend's profile and was interested in your site. i'm gonna go look at it now, it sounds good.

how can i be more involved in this venture of yours?

If that's what you want, haha.

Oh! :D
Can I have a sneak preview?

I suppose...
I didn't want you to think, "She totally just stabbed me in the back and took credit for all my work!"

Don't want to upset the grand ruler of Fresh Pen Land. [:

Well I'm glad I could assist. (:

I just didn't want to take credit where it wasn't due.

Would you mind if I said that? O.O

Yep!

Maybe he can get some friends of his to join.

Oh! And I came up with a brilliant idea the other day.
I was thinking about asking my AP English teacher to make joining The Fresh Pen an extra credit type assignment...
Then a bunch of classmates would join, and they'd submit their essays/poems/whatever and get critiqued!
It'd work out for you AND the class! :D

Oh, okay. (:
Just wanted to know for future reference, haha.

Yeah he is! Up the Spout Again was fantastic.
His about me was very relateable, as loads of writers tend to ignore their gift for a certain period of time.
I only wish he'd have come to the site sooner!

That's so cool :D
Do you have to be 16 or 18 to work at the library?

Haha score! I'll definitely look into it. (:

Alrighty! Sleep well buddy :D

Do you like it so far? (:

Awh. :D
Haha, you know you're supposed to be involved in literature when you consider the library your second home...
Do you volunteer at the library, or actually work there?

Fun stuff!
(:

How long have you been lifeguarding?

You're quite welcome, haha.

Well that's cool. (:
Do you lifeguard at a marina type thing? Water park?

Nice simile usage there. (:

Hm, that's an interesting combination of jobs haha.
What prompted you to want to go into the lifeguard business?

That's right; you SHOULDN'T say that.
People are joining, slowly but surely.
(:
It kinda irritates me how people always say "How do you know if I'm a good writer or not?"
I have no room to talk, but I've come to trust you pretty closely.
It's not like you're some perv on the internet asking for our address or anything.

Hullo my favorite TFP owner <3 hahaha.

It's okay. You don't have to hide your affection for me any longer! Haha, I'm totally kidding. (:

My entire life? That's a tall order you're asking for!
Well, my brother came up to visit me yesterday, and he just now left. My mom, brother and I went into town to go see Hot August Nights (which is like a super nifty retro car parade thing), and that's about it!
Tell me about what's going on with you? :D

Thanks! I'll let you know... but, haha so far... my writing ain't that good X)

A special Mibba PR question?
Oh boy, oh boy!
:D

Okay.

Okay.
I'm still thinking about it though.

Hm, thank you :)
Alot of people seem really impressed by my writing :XD
Like my mum had friends over and my dad bragged about my writing :XD
And so I showed their friends and they all seemed impressed O.O

haha thats cool :)