paul.prescott / Comments

wow paul you've really nailed the dark creeks waters..didn't expect you to get it so well : ) of course you've expressed much more complicatedly than i couldve but you've got the overall idea. congrats buddy :P

loved you're alternate ending paul. i'm gonna add it :)

Hello Paul! Thanks for the comment! I'll be sure to check out some of you work!

thanks for commenting on my poem! I'm glad you like it, and while it wasn't meant to be sensual, I know it completly comes across that way unless you understand it's origin.

Hey you!! I remember you now! LOL sorry, different name and all, completly threw me off, not that I remember every name that passes through my head anyways, but... yeah..

I'm glad you liked my story. It was actually my first story, i wrote the beggining when i was in a very angry state, so i'm kinda in block now. Feel free to critic and tell me if theres anything to improve.

So your friends birthdays are within a date from each other thats cool, in case of parties it could be done on on day to celebrate all.My ex bestfriend was also a sagittarian I'm a Cancerian and most of my friends are, Our b days follow each other .

I'm gonna read some of your lyrics/poems now.

okay : )

Sorry I don't know Maroon 5's those songs but If you know I love ' I wont go home without you ' and 'Beauty Queen' the most. Yeah ! Demi Rocks I know I love her, her songs are just my type. I love all of her songs and the new ones are great. :)

hehe alright. it's actually good to see someone who takes criteria seriously : )

of course. go for it :)

mkay :) p.s I commented both of your latest

Thats exactly what I want to do! That's my purpose in this world. To make the world a better place, but getting people to read my work and change. Change for the good :D.

Paul your friggin awesome :)

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haha no it's okay. that's the point. tell me : )

also thak you for your comments on my poems. the dark creek's waters is exceptionally abstract, not many people can understand it.

I FREEKING LOVE YOUUUU. Thank you for commenting my poem Justice I was kinda upset no one had, I thought people just thought it was a load of bollocks. But you really seem to understand what it's about. THANK YOU!!!

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Wow i'm happy for you that it's coming along so well :) And i'll be sure to keep looking at your profile. Your work is great :)

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I have a new favourite :D I Wish/Girl I knew it's so great! The piano is really beautiful. Your really talented. Your lucky to have such a talent. Your work is amazing.

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I really like how you describe your music, the conveyour belt. Very unique way of explainging. I like it. Right i'm going to read you work now :D


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You've gotta be kidding me I just wrote you a friggin essay then Error came up apparently I wasn't signed in. So here I go again. Take Two.

I like the long comments, the more detailed the better, I don't mind if it's critical that just helps me improve. Thank you, when I was writing Lost I was feeling exactly what that poem says. I was really confused, and well lost there is no other way of putting it. But i always find if you write down what's going on with you it really helps. I think my favourite of yours is Your Look, I really like it, it's great. I haven't read many of your poems/songs yet but i'll be sure to.

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Hey, that's no problem, you have a awesome talent and you deserve to be told :). Thank you so much for my comments they're so lovely, and I really apriciate how detailed they are. Thank you :D

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