September 24th, 2008 at 08:46pm
Glad you liked it =]
Thank you for the comments. I do prefer this chapter to the 2nd one.
And your suggestions were great. i think the first two chapters read much more smoothly now.
(Especially my comment about the hipbones...i liked that one lol)
Next one will be up as soon as i write it lol.
xx
And I'm feeling much better, thanks!
(: