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OH HAI! :) I wondered where'd you disappeared to :P Take your time and get some sleep!

Oh I'm glad you don't think so!

Also, I just really want them to stay together and be happy.....I'm not too sure how I feel about Lilly making a reappearance!!! EEK!!!! I can't wait :)

Lololol. Thanks for the story comment :) Gerard's hair has been making me lul since he dyed it, so I felt the need to share it in story form.

I do that too >.< I get to the end of a chapter and I'm just like...ok, tired, get it finished....haha. It happens! :) And I really did like it!

I think I'm going to stop posting Stained Glass at chapter five (which I've planned to do since the beginning, just wasn't sure whether to make it three or five) and I don't think Seth comes in during four and five...so you should be good! :D He's a pretty major part of the story though >.<; I'm glad you like it!!!!!!

And thanks! I think things are starting to get a little dull in The Margin right now, but luckily the next few chapters pick things up a tad. Hopefully...we'll see.....

Mmk, as far as your story goes, it was not ramblish but there were some spelling and grammar mistakes...maybe you just edited in a hurry? Shouldn't be hard to catch on a second edit though, like you said you were thinking of doing. :) I really did like it though. You're good with expressing emotion in your characters, so I feel like I know what they're going through. Only thing that confused me was in the end when he knew what was going through her head..but I didn't!! Still, I really liked it :)

And good!! I'm still a little concerned though, since you're not the only one who thought that. I still think it needs a lot of work, but maybe I'll not tweak as much concerning the fact that it's a flashback.

...ANNND! Good news, I updated The Margin last weekend :) Unless you've already read that one...in which case....I'll try and write another one soon >.<

Ahh soo good to hear from you! I understand the college work issue - I'm in the same boat!!!

Thank you thank youuu for the comment. I was worried it's too much or didn't flow well or was rushed or something...but your comment made me feel better about it :) It's supposed to be a flashback (the reason her neck hurts and she wears the scarf) but I think I didn't make that clear enough, so I'm gonna tweak it a little. Or I could explain in a later chapter....anywho!

Anxiously awaiting your update - and don't worry! I didn't think the last one was rushed at all. You're fine, and your writing is wonderful, and all is well :)

Hullo dear!! Are you going to update soon? Hehe :D

Also I'm anxiously awaiting your comments about the new chapter of Stained Glass...I'm kind of unsure about it. Anyway, hadn't heard from you in a while so stopped by to say hi!!

Hey, how are you :) I havent been coming online for a really REALLY long time :ı Anyway , now I am back and I changed the ending of my story Stuck In Between, remember you really liked it and commented :) I would be really happy if you could read the new ending and tell me if you like it or not by commenting :)
Oh and by the way, I really enjoy your stories, keep writing.

I've been meaning to give you a shoutout for a while! And finally remembered! I hope you got lots of new readers. :)

Yes, they are so good together it's scary. I shudder to think of what Dom and Ash could get into it....

P.S. ! I creeped myself out writing that one!! Probably shouldn't write about footsteps on stairs when all alone in a large house at two in the morning.....

Ahh yes I understand that feeling! It starts to feel so BLAH after you've read and edited it so many times...but it didn't come across that way to meeee!!! :)
Glad you liked the udpate!! I think you'll like Seth less and less as the story progresses >.<
Have a good day! <3

Hmm well, in my experience, if there's nothing to fill in those slow spaces then why include them at all?? Reading it, I didn't feel like it was moving too fast. I think you're ok on that one!

And THANK YOU! I was so worried about it! (Guess all writers are, eh?! hehe) I do love her mum, she's hilarious.

Yayyyy! Yes, I'm hoping the showdown between the two of them is exciting....I just wrote some of it, and it amused me. So! We'll see if it works :P Can't wait for your updaaaate!

Awww I'm so glad you said that, it's nice to know someone thinks I have talent! <3 It's definitely a different tone than The Margin....I'm so relieved that you think it's chilling, it's supposed to be dark and tormented. Yay!!!! :D :D Everytime you leave a comment it makes me happppy

Well thank you thank you! I'm so glad that you enjoy it :D I'm on break buuuuut that doesn't always equal writing :P We'll see!! I'll see what I can do.

That's okay, but if you'd still like to be in it and just need an extension, let me know. :)

Hello. I just wanted to let you know that my contest that you entered, 'The Consequences of Love' ends tomorrow. I really hope you can still enter! If you can't make the deadline just let me know! I can't wait to read your entry! :)

You're very welcome =) I just found it today and I loved it. =D

I'm so glad you're still enjoying it!! And that the pacing is good :P Dunno how far you are, but I should have a new chapter up soon!

Hey! I just wanted to let you know that my contest that you entered, 'The Consequences of Love' ends 1 week from today! I can't wait to read your entry! And if you have any problems be sure to let me know!