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Can you do me a huge favor and check out my best friend's story? I know it would mean the world to her if you commented :)
Constructive Criticism is always welcome. Please and thank you!!

http://stories.mibba.com/read/399101/Perfect/

Thanks. :) He is amazing. <3

then I'll just have to wait won't I?

Holy Crap woman i love your profile.

PLEEEESE don't make me wait a week!!

I don't think I can bear to do a sequel, despite how much I loved writing the story, but thank you very much for reading the rest of it.

>(.......................................I don't care about morals, I still think Gerard should've forgotten about lindsey and won Rayven over, because he obviously wasn't in love with lindsey any more.

haha, true, but cheaters usually get caught, meaning Gerard should get caught and and LynZ should get out of the picture lol

I read them, I personally don't think it was any of Jamie's business to get involved, I think he should have let Rayven and Gerard talk and I think Rayven should have told him that instead of just letting Jamie chase him out grrrrr >( I do not like Jamie!!! haha they were good updates though even if it did enrage me.

Of course I'll read it!
I'm sure it's as amazing as all the other ones

I saw that. Thank you. I have read it already!!!
Keep it fabulous, girl. You've got talent.

~Shira

loved the update ^__^

I love that u are updating the gerard way story! its my fav! =)) i hope u continue to update =)

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so happy I could motivate you! It's such an amazing story!!!!!!

I gotta Skype. :D
Do you have one?

Duuuude. I went to the My Chemical Romance concert yesterday. It fucking sucked. Like, forreal. They mostly played songs off their new album, and they looked like a completely different band. It was awful. It just made me hate them more.

When they played Vampires Will Never Hurt You, I cried. Like, fucking sobbed. It was the most depressing thing ever. I miss the old My Chemical Romance. I miss the band that saved my life, and that I couldn't go a day without thinking about.

I can't stand thinking about them anymore, it just makes me hate them more thinking about how fucking horrible they are now. I hate their new image or whatever, and everything about them. They're just in it for the money. They were rude,and didn't interact with the audience at all. They had fucking zero stage presence.

Ugh, I don't wanna think about it anymore, it just makes me angry.

Hahaha, yeah. They were fucking ADORABLE in the Box Full of Sharp Objects video.
Have you heard anything about their next album? I don't really go to their website, and I don't have a Twitter or anything, so I'm completely clueless. ><

Oh my god. I used to fucking adore the Spice Girls. I haven't thought about them in ages! They're about to go on my iPod, thanks to you. ;)

I bought my tickets a while back, a little before their new album, so I kinda have to go. It probably'll just make me hate them more, which is gonna suck. :\ Oh well, I guess I'll be fulfilling my former little Gerard Way fangirl's dream.

Oh my god, yay! I wish The Used were coming somewhere near us sometime soon. I was watching Berth the other day for the first time in ages, and I had forgotten how amazing they were. :D I miss the old guys, though. They were all so cute when they were in their earlier twenties. Now they're all homeless-looking. :\

Oh, lucky! I've been getting more into Sum 41 lately. I'd forgotten how much I love music from the nineties and early two thousands. :D

I'll try and do that from now on, thanks. I'll definitely get to the MCR concert super early. I still want to see them, for cuz I promised myself I would when I was in love with them. And they'll play some of their old songs too, so.

LOL, I'm gonna start calling people poppet. XD

Oh my god, so last night was amazing. It was also kind of horrible, though. Anyways, here's what happened.

The ADTR concert was outside. Me and Case got there, and after like, half an hour, we got to the middle of the mosh pit. We got separated after the first set, but I was still fine. I finally got almost the very front (just like, one or two people were in front of me).

I lost my shoes, my jacket, and my bow, which sucked. Then, the crowd got totally out of hand. Like, it was the worst crowd I'd ever been in. Everyone was screaming and getting knocked down and crushed, and you couldn't move your arms at all, and everyone was packed so close together you could barely breathe. Literally. My breathes were all shallow and I had to make a conscious effort to keep breathing. It was crazy. And some guy purposely poured his beer all over me.

Anyway, I started throwing up, and I was dehydrated, and I seriously felt like I was about to pass out, so the guy in front of me picked me up and handed me to the security guard halfway through Bring Me the Horizon, which sucked because A Day To Remember was the only band I wanted to see, and I missed them.

The crowd was huge by then, and I couldn't even see the stage, so I went over to where the t-shirt stands were and sat down and started fucking SOBBING. I don't even know why, I know I was overreacting, but I was just really upset. Then it started pouring rain - like, my bra was wet. It felt like I was standing in the shower.

But this really nice girl came up to me and gave me some of her water, and made sure I was all right. And the security guard felt bad for me, so he let me sit in the bar even though I'm not old enough, and he bought me a t-shirt to change into. Then I called my friend Hannah and she talked to me until the concert was over. So everything was all cool. :D

I wish I could call you, cuz this story sounds a lot better in person. But whatever, haha. :D

Hahaha, I know! BMTH's gonna be with A Day To Remember, but I'm really not all that excited for them. I mean, I'm not complaining about getting to see them, they're just not really that amazing in my opinion. It's fine to have a few parts that are just banging and screaming, but dear god, when you can't here the guitars or singing over it, it gets a little ridiculous. And I've never really listened to that much of Cradle of Filth, but from what I've heard they're pretty kickass for being that scream-y. :)

My laptop used to have one in it, but my dog chewed it up.. Haha :) And yeah, that'd be cool :) I've always wanted to go to Australia. It sounds really pretty from what I've heard. :)