Napolean / Comments

That. Would. Be. Awesome. I love the idea that the wizard was just trying to lure her in and lying to her, but I found that whole part where he could see through Annabeth's eyes freaky. I was like AHHH! Haha:) Can't wait until the next chapter:)

Yeah, I get what you mean about the great dreams being interrupted. I have a habit of having really detailed elaborate dreams also I can lucid dream, which is when you realize you’re in a dream and alter it to whatever you want to. In the end it usually turns into a death match between two sides, last time it was dragon vs. Nazis. The dragon won.

No problem. I hope things get better soon and less stressful. Don't worry I go bipolar as well sometimes, especially when I've just gotten up.

I don't know how to get a hold of you. Add me to Skype. I sent you an invite.

I'm ever so sorry. I didn't mean to offend you at all. It was just comments and suggestions. You can't seriously expect me to only tell you only the good. I praised you on the concept of the story and said I did enjoy it. Plus I said it all in the most kind manner as I could. I thought you could take some criticism as all good authors can take honest opinions with a grain of salt. Darling, I know people who have actually sent their work off to people and have got a thick essay back on why their work can't be published and how they should improve with it, with only the bad mentioned. Come on, be a good girl and take it on the chin. I know it might seem bad now but it's good to be told these things so you can improve. I myself know that well and when I first started putting my stuff up on the internet I got whole rants on why I sucked at writing and why I should just give up, but I took it and worked on what they hated. Also that comment about wanting the magical land to not be real is what I wanted to happen and I would be fine if it was real. I was like a person sitting on the couch watching a movie and going "I really wish those two would get together." I hope you can forgive me for I honestly didn't mean to cause you any grief. I was just judging someone’s level of what they could take by my own, because I would take a whole rant about why my worked sucked and honestly be happy that someone would be giving an honest opinion. Sincerely, Fagin Smith.
I am really, really sorry.

Girl, you've got WAY too much on your plate!
You needa chill out with the crazy contest and beta-reading stuff and relax! I can't believe how busy you are. It actually makes me jealous that you can handle it all without exploding. :D I, for one, can't do more than two things at once.

Haha, yeah. They're pretty G. I like the little Down Syndrome girl in the bee costume. :D She makes my day!

your welcome its very original all the stories lately just blur together but yours stuck out

Oh my god, I used to LOVE Blind Melon.
No Rain was like, the shit. When I was eight, I had this six-month long obsession with them. My dad HATED it.
Oh, such good memories.
Nothing much is up with me. I've been getting sick a lot this morning, which is no fun. My dad's like, "Just so you know, I'm not holding your hair while you puke. Unless you want me to puke on you while you're doing it too, that is." Ahhh, my father. XD

I feel kinda bad now, since I TOTALLY didn't notice your comment sitting right there on my profile.
I mean, it was RIGHT THERE, and I managed to miss it.
But anyways, it was actually the first chapter of your entry for the contest that got me hooked in the first place! I'm excited to see what other people write, too (and a little nervous!). There were some really great pictures options, I can't wait to see what comes out of them.
Good luck to you, and I really enjoy your story so far!

Im glad to hear that you took it well I almost tried to take it off I thought I was being too mean

well I think that you should definatly consider continuing 'To Buy Her Love' it sounds very interesting!

i just thought that you should know that your very pretty and your writing is amazing!

Thank you for commenting on my story. :D

:D
do you want it so that you still have the layout form you have now? so you can see all the comments and your info and your stories, etc? :)

Yeah, I did. I thought it was a bit more original than the other contests, and it reminded me a lot of Alice in Wonderland. I actually forgot I joined, it, haha! So thank you for reminding me :) I've just been so busy lately with school, and with my own story development, and with the contest I am hosting, and with trying to have a life. I hope I can get an entry in, I wouldn't like to have to drop out. I will look over your story and give you con/crit though! :)

Hey.
I just saw your comment on the requests page for a new layout.
I'll give it a go, if you want? :3
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Yes, you got to love the constructive criticism! XD

^_^ Thank you for reading my story! I'll go change the errors right away!

Okay! Thanks =D