No problem! I love your story and I don't have a problem with giving feedback! Sorry this is a message, I' on my phone right now becasue I don't have internet access. I'm staying at my aunts for a couple of days. But I agree 100% with what you said about the guys not letting anyone beat someone up without them getting fucked up themselves. It would be pretty awesome to be in your story. I'll be more than happy to give you ideas about the story if you'd like. :)
But if you decide to put me in the story to beat that bitch Tamy's ass, if it gave you something to write off, you could use me as a female friend for....crap forgive me I can't remember the name of the character lol. but I could be her friend, and maybe be a gf of one of the guys.....*wink wink*
If you need any ideas, let me know. :)
Your welcome(: your story is interesting, especially since I love the characters from Jackass as well ! It just sucks that Ryan had to die so young :'((
Keep on with your story <3