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  • FuriousXStarlight

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    aww. I'm sure its great. You'll figure everything out. don't rush yourself.
    November 22nd, 2009 at 11:02pm
  • dinoxsauuhh

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    haha; well they dn't know what their missing ^_^
    November 16th, 2009 at 01:35am
  • dinoxsauuhh

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    sweeeeet name (:
    it's very unique
    November 15th, 2009 at 09:35pm
  • FuriousXStarlight

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    Aww thats too bad :( I',m sure you'll break out of it soon! All you need is some inspiration! Try finding some new, epic music to listen to! That always helps me. Its also good to find music that suits your story, it helps get you thinking about it more and pumps out some more ideas.
    Best of luck!!!
    November 13th, 2009 at 11:49pm
  • dinoxsauuhh

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    Thanks!
    I'm Nicole BTW, hru?
    November 11th, 2009 at 05:37pm
  • Luvstuffedanimals

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    I sees ,hows that working out?
    Sorry my computer was down so i could'nt reply till now
    November 8th, 2009 at 07:05pm
  • Just a Girl.

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    that sounds cool. i always though boarding school was strict and hard. are there any mean girls there?
    October 23rd, 2009 at 10:09pm
  • Airi.

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    No problem. (:
    October 23rd, 2009 at 02:43am
  • Just a Girl.

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    well i go to public school. i guess you can say it's okay. what do you do in boarding school?
    October 23rd, 2009 at 01:32am
  • Utter.Opheliac

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    Yah...I'm used to sad anime...don't mind them at all!!! hahaha
    October 22nd, 2009 at 11:54pm
  • Utter.Opheliac

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    thnx for the journal comment...lolz I'll check it out XD
    October 22nd, 2009 at 11:47pm
  • FuriousXStarlight

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    Hmm its hard to say, I suppose it depends on your ideas for a plot and the characters and what you want to have happen. It would work as either really. Having it as the beginning makes the reader feel as though they have come in on the middle of the story, landing into a seemingly "random" moment in their life with a lot of history, which is rather neat. You can always divulge more background information as you go along, but even though we don't have all those background facts enough information is given to help the reader fill in the blanks.
    It was really well written. I hope I've helped some, it really could go either way, its up to you really. You could try writing it both ways and see how you feel about it.Maybe continue onwards but if you feel that you need to add something more onto the beginning you always can.
    October 22nd, 2009 at 08:11pm
  • isobelle;

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    Hey, thanks for the journal comment :) I completely understand where you're coming from. Sometimes, because I don't eat in the mornings(even though I know I should), I become really light-headed and dizzy but I've never fainted. It doesn't do much for your self confidence when you're comparing yourself to friends. They probably feel envious of you too even if they don't say it.
    October 22nd, 2009 at 12:09pm
  • Just a Girl.

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    so hows school in UK?
    October 22nd, 2009 at 04:11am
  • love.is.all.we.need.

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    YAY! Okay, thanks! :]
    October 22nd, 2009 at 12:03am
  • love.is.all.we.need.

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    Hmm I think it would be more interesting if he betrayed her. :3
    October 21st, 2009 at 11:50pm
  • love.is.all.we.need.

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    Maybe a confrontation between Megan and Collin? ;]
    October 21st, 2009 at 11:28pm
  • love.is.all.we.need.

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    Yay, really? :D
    That would be awesome!!
    October 21st, 2009 at 11:23pm
  • love.is.all.we.need.

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    Hey, what's up? :]
    I liked your story! I'd like to say continue, please!!<3
    October 21st, 2009 at 10:47pm
  • FuriousXStarlight

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    You are very welcome :) I understand. If you don't get the amount of comments you desire I seriously suggest you write more and perhaps just keep it saved to your computer for your own enjoyment, perhaps even, if you feel strongly enough about it, attempt publishing.
    Have a nice day :)
    October 21st, 2009 at 10:30pm