I know it's easy to take to heart. I've been really sensitive for the past couple weeks. My girlfriend broke up with me for my best friend almost a month ago, so it's still fresh in my mind. That's probably why I'm so sensitive to feedback right now. -A
It does surprise me that you subscribed. I see that you have different takes on the story than some people. And I really do appreciate the criticism. Don't get me wrong, I do appreciate it. I know I shouldn't really take it to heart. I need to work on that a little. Lol. But thank you for taking the time to provide me with some feedback. -A
Grammar is never really my strong suit, I'm a comma hoarder. Plus, you caught me in the very beginning stages of writing so it's pretty bad grammar wise Thanks for the comment though! Greatly appreciated!
Thank you for the three comments - particularly the honest one on 'Day 36.' That is an old story now that I wrote maybe a year or two ago, so I was interested in someone else's opinion on it, which is why I entered it into the comment swap feature. With the layout in 'Fragments' - I was planning on changing it to something more connected to the story. But I'm still figuring out how to use the new layout maker! Anyway, thanks again!
Thank you for your comment on Don't Let Me Go. Usually i wouldnt like the layout either, but i just think it works for some reason... in all honesty, my grammar sucks, and i spell check and whatever on Word, but it doesnt pick up everything. i will be more careful though. thanks (: also, did you recieve this story twice on Comment Swap, or is it because i recieved yours that your username seems familiar? :P
It's my pleasure :) I think it was mainly just the focus of the story, I usually read little fluffy one shots that are surrounded by Drarry or Dramione pairings whilst they're still at school which meant that yours, although incredibly amazing, wasn't exactly tailored to my usual reading :') xx
thanks for the story comment, I entirely get the whole slash thing. I used to never read it. And his name being Raven was just kinda spur of the moment and I was tired. Too late to change it now...