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I understand what you're trying to say, but you said in the comment (and this is a direct quote), "I didn’t read past the ‘200 stab wounds’ part, honestly, because I found it to be entirely ludicrous and almost laughable". That doesn't sound harsh to you? About the number of stab wounds, do you remember the Blue-Eyed Butcher? She killed her husband almost the same way, so it's not as "unrealistic" as you think. And about the number of cuts, there are a lot of people that have made way more cuts than that at one time. You can't say it's not realistic, because almost anything is these days. I'm sorry, but there are some things you are wrong about. -A

Thank you for the comment. Although I don't really agree with your view on the story and plenty others don't agree with you (and trust me, people have told me) I appreciate you taking the time to leave some type of criticism so that I know what to avoid and what to fix. But maybe you should read what you write to people before you send it. You sounded pretty harsh. -A

Thanks for commenting :P
I know Word doesn't pick up on everything, but whenever I write an assignment for English, or something, I usually get about 99-100% in grammar, and sometimes spelling, so I don't see the point in editing if I know it's going to be nearly perfect xD. That, and I don't have the time to re-read it.
But thank you nonetheless :3

thanks for commenting! :)

Why thank you. Years of practice and definitely nowhere near perfection, but I enjoy writing the way that I do. I'm glad people like reading it as well. Hahaha

Thanks so much for the comment! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I will indeed be continuing with it. (:

Thank you very much for the comment! I really do truly appreciate the constructive criticism and normally I would definitely take it to heart and adjust the story to fit it, but I already have almost the entire story completely written out and most of it posted on a different website and it would be very difficult to go back and change it now. Plus this is just for a bit of fun so I'm not too concerned with historical accuracy. But I really do thank you for the comment and for letting me know where I went wrong so I can avoid that in the future.

Haha. The adrenaline blocks out the pain first! :) And LOL! Silly goose. You won't become an alcoholic from drinking loads. Just grow immune to it so it doesn't have an effect :P

HAH! So was I... Then I ate most of it so I'm happy :D LOL! And nah, your team would look out for yah ;) Plus, if you win, you have a huge party after and get wasted... Usual Saturday night in Dyffryn Tanat, basically :P

Absolutely stark raving bonkers... :P But I love her all the same! :) Ohhhh! That was nice of her! Oh, lovely! Never been to that bit of Spain.. Have a lovely time :D And lol! Really? Rugby is easy.. Try not to get killed :P We broke someone's collar-bone today! HaHaHa! Failure. Aw, thanks! She's happy now eating her castle birthday cake. Not a cake with a picture on, but an actual CASTLE! It's so awesome! HA! :D

Don't worry, that's not sad! My best friend takes pictures of her food before she eats it... That's sad... LOL! I tend to use the trusty pen and the back of the hand strategy :) AW! Sounds cool as beans :) Where in Spain you going? I wish my nan would pay for me to go to Royal Welsh this year.. (It won't happen!) HaHa! I play rugby :) I'm a fly-half :) Fun stuff! Life's alriiiiiiight! It was my sister's birthday yesterday so I have loads of cake :) LOL!

Yeah, there is that... But then you just pull stupid faces and they back off... And your friends pretend they don't know you... :P It's good to be a freak! :D AW! Showers are the best for story ideas! I always get them after training when I'm shattered and can't be bothered to write them down... They pick the best of times to come to you, don't they? :P So! How's life? :)

AW! Thanks so much! :D I can see you doing English. You can really tell you put your heart in it as well as having good plotlines. Some people concentrate more on the plotline more than the actual description with I feel is a very important part of it. It helps to just sit and watch people around you, too. You can see lots of stuff from just watching for five minutes. :)

HA! Yup! I'm hoping to do Film Studies/Media Studies! :) Hopefully going to go into scriptwriting, writing the scripts for movies and soap operas, etc. :D

I thought you did, but I'm blonde as a brunette can be so... Oh! Good luck! I hope you get in! :D Bangor's really nice, aparently. Aberystwyth's good, too!

Aw! You lucky bean! :) And what? Strange Cardiffians... Don't you guys get a discount on rugby tickets? One of the only reasons I want to go to Cardiff Uni next year is because you guys have the Millenium Stadium... :P And yeah, S4C is supah cool! I always watch Cyw with my baby brother... Sali Mali is the shizzle. :D

Tah :P And coolios! I love Cardiff, you're so lucky. You guys have the millenium stadium! No fair... :'( And yeah, we mostly do. It's kinda odd when you've lived most of your life in a Shropshire household where everything's really English and black-country and all you hear around you is Welsh... :P Yeah! I took French and Spanish at GCSE... Failed Spanish, though. HaHa! You're very talented knowing all those languages :D

HaHa! Aw! It's a hard language to learn! I only learnt it because I was put into school early and there was only room in the Welsh Unit :)

The sounds of the words are really what makes Welsh a great language :) You a Welsh speaker, too? :)

Yes, indeedy! :) Thanks! Most people think it's a stupid language! But it's a great language! The literature is just... wow! :) LOL!