I will do. I read Guitar Case and it was quite interesting.
I enjoyed your writing style and format, but how he seemed a bit 'touchy' in a first meet seemed unrealistic. Perhaps, making him appear more as a shadow if one hangs around a graveyard.
Welcome to Mibba! Its really cool and sort of surreal that you first and last name match that of the Twilight saga's lead character. I bet you get a lot of that. lol