AS.I.LAY.DYING / Comments

All three of my contests are open; you may enter any and all of them. Which were you referring to? :)

Yeah, I can see how Weeds is so much better than End. I kinda treat End like crud....I don't put a lot of time into it. :/ Ah, well. I like Weeds better 'cause I have a moral/lesson/poetic insight that I haven't lost track of, yet!

Thank you so much for taking the time to read it!

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lol... Im glad you like my ranting!
lol and most of the stuff that im "venting" is just my life... Just the same ole stuff lol... But im glad that you enjoy it :D

yea... My poem bro is a true story...
i had to watch my brother almost kill himself... Me 12 and him 17, it wasnt a good day. But thats how my life is. Lol

Thank you for the kind comment on my poem, "Not Alone". I appreciate it! :]]


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I have begun another story, if you're interested. ^.^ It's called 'Weeds' and I have...seven chapters up! ^-^

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Thank you very much. :)

Thank you for the comment! :) I really appreciate it.

thanks so much that means a lot!

i wouldn't be half the writer i am if it weren't for all the hurt i go through.

and yes that was about what happend to me and thanks!! and yes suicide was a huge thought but thankfully second chances were given! =)

thanks for the comment!!

Ha, it's no problem. Crying doesn't bother me(;

no problem, your a great writer :]

-sigh- It's alright. But if you come away from this with anything, I hope it's a lesson in realizing how your 'internet persona' is reflecting in another's eyes. Ask yourself "how will they see this? Is that what I want them to see?"

That is also the BEST tip for writing stories and poems that I have ever heard. ^.^


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I despise with all my being when people type ALL CAPS FOR NO REASON. It looks as though you're screaming at me. I HATE being screamed at.



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thanks so much for the poem comment!

thanks for the comment on my poem *hugs*
it was nice of you ^^

For your information, this is an excerpt from my 'dislikes' list on my profile: "5) When people don't bother editing the constant spelling mistakes in their published poems or stories, or send me comments that are blatantly covered in mistakes. It's distracting from the beauty of your work, people! Plus, it hurts my feelings that you didn't bother spending five seconds of your time to send me a comment worth something. :("

I put it on there for a reason.

I'll try, if I have time.

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I have a whole chapter devoted to that!! :D :D It's emotional, has flashbacks, is slathered in pain, and has some pretty EPIC metaphors, if I do say so myself.

It's coming up fast. ^.^


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