Thank you for the comment on my story! I'm glad you found my story heartwarming! I appreciate telling me about how the sentence structure didn't match the personality of the girl! :]
Hola chica!
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Yeah idon't know that many people who DON'T just get that type of comment but it still gets on my nerves that thats all the evffort people put into it. THis is an authors site so we should have more input to each story than that/
The constructive criticism is okay :].
Yeah, the comments that say, "more please." "update?" "That was good" They're okay because sometimes that's all I can get T_T.
I'll try =) I'm working on embelishing Guarded, I'm working on ch.3 right now. I made the dialog a little easier to follow, I hope, and I'll put in a bigger age differance and such. It's cool with the harsh comments. I'm trying to toughen my shell, so not too harsh. I posted a poem by the way. It's kind of sad.