TottallyJO / Comments

ok i believe constructive critism is the only way we can get better at anything. I don't mind people laying the hurt on me. If i am ever way to harsh is comments can you tell me?I try not to be but i like to leave people with a little critiquing. Comments that just say 'good' 'okay' boor me. I think they are useless. And your one-shot i thought was awesome. Can you continue it? it was awesome.

Well, no offence but there are people who operate by dominace, they make people believe what they say by insulting them, like a form of control. I have sadly watched it happen to people I know. It's sad but done enough messes with your mind, so if that's what you mean then I'm sorry. But if it just is fake, I was rushed because the deadline was soon. Thank you for your feedback! I just posted a new oneshot if your interested =)

I will if you write your entry soon. I'll read it anyway, but really, please write it soon:)

My contest ends on December 31st, so have your entry in soon please. =)

Thanks for the Dancer's Life Comment =) I have plenty more stories up=) Check out the neonxcolors stories too.

I have a thing for you to check out: http://stories.mibba.com/read/224842/Letters-of-Love/15/

Before you read, no it's not about me, but I wrote the italic part and think of the last name Smith while you read.

I updated =)

I have a new story up! It's called A Dream Come True.

Hola! I have a writing contest up if you want to check it out. The url is: http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/151227/
The pictures are really cool.

Hey Thanks, for my story comment :) , keep checking it for updates if you like. xoxo

Bye Cha.
Silver Vamp story wrighter.

thanks!

Oh! I love your layout! I might get a new one soon =)

The talking to herself is kind of the thing I was aiming for, but I fixed it for ya =)

jomg (lol my lame excuse of a joke)
welcome to mibba
good morning!
see you later
olivia

its going good.. anyone else use mibba i know besides u?

Hello, how's it going?