Bumblebee Brie / Comments

You're welcome

You're funny, OF COURSE I read it!

Absolutely! Haha. U might not like it but its a twist :)

I'm good actually. Life has been going great. hah
How are you?? :)

ohz ok well I will read it(:

Awhh no probs!
You have a great story :)

Once again, you're freakin' amazing.
But then again that reallly isn't anything new. (:

So like did you take the one before down or what? Sorry I am easily confused lol

its okay lol :)

I believe I will finally start reading your story tonight(:

Thanks for the comment on my story! And ik its sudden but I have an idea to go with it. Its kinda of a surprise! :)

cool. im working on psyched out with a friend. im trying to fit in time to work on it's 4th chapter

yeah I'm subscribe to it.

P.S., post one of yours one day :) I bet it's a ton better than you say!
And I will work on trying to make my songfics less stilted as I do want to write more of them! :)

Or that I'm a hopeless rambler =/ ahh well. Ahh, when I say everymans man i mean that he's bland- you could apply his voice to a plethora of different people. Lex's character is shown through her decisions and her thought processes as well as her interactions with others. You can tell she wasn't contrived.

Living, I always find, depends on the character. Some people are difficult to bring to life, others run riot and ruin plans :') second type is always better though. I can barely churn out a two line dialogue sometimes but what can you do?

I think I gathered courage from the fact that (even if I do say so myself) that it is much better than some of the stuff I've seen posted, or some of the things I have written.

Thank you for reading it, and helping me on it :) <3

wait.. what did you read?

Yeh, I know. The thing is, I don't really mind if people read it or not, its there if they want to.

Ahwww. Freshmaayn! Heheh. <3
I loved my freshman year, how do you like high school?
Only three more years left for you! :D

Holycrap. My teachers are just like that, they must think we only have their class or that we have no lives. I hate it. What year are you in school? I'm a juniorrrr. Hardest year yet. :P But, thankfully I only have one year left! :D

First and foremost, before i say anything else, I will say thank you for the criticism :) seriously, when I read it I just had this huge happy smile on my face :3 so thank you.

Ahh, I understand what you mean. I struggle with dialogue most- it kills me. I do not enjoy it. I think making believable characters is the hardest bit, and you do it so well :)

Nah, I don't think I can be bothered to edit blue flashing light, it's not very important to me. It is rather cliché, isn't it? In my pitiful defence, it was written primarily because I wanted to write a song-fic for that song. The characters are very underdeveloped. I can't imagine the narrator in my head very well. For me, the most irritating thing about that story is the house. It's not the sort of house I imagined at all, but it fits in with the sequel (although it's not really a sequel, and it doesn't fit in with that at all >< )

Thank you, I changed the point of view after I'd written it.

What would you say the biggest problem with characterisation is? The lack of personal detail or just because they are all sort of everyman-characters?
And thank you once again for commenting (I'm sure you didn't expect a novella in return so my apologies).