wonderlust queen. / Comments

yeahh I sympathize with you, trust. I'm sooo broke, I can't pay attention :)
boys are such girlss when it comes to their video games! when they lose they get all PMS-y and shtuff. like damn, you need a midol? x)

hahaha dude I played left 4 dead on x-box live at my friend's house right? so I'm like running around, and at some point I decide to just give up looking for zombies and just start shooting shit. I was like taking down ppl too, I thought I was doing well. suddenly, my friend starts screaming "what the fuck?! tori you're shooting me! stop shooting me!" and then we're on speaker with the people on our team, and they start screaming "you killed us, you fucking killed us!" and then we lost. so I learned like two things from that: 1) I fail supremely at fps games and 2) boys can be uber drama queens. my friend complained for the rest of the night of incessant pain in the places where I shot "him" the game. he was limping and all that shit x)

and you're getting it today?! I'm so jealous :( I can't even wait to try it, I'm sure it's gonna be epic.

Oh no! Well I'm sure it'll turn out wonderful!
Oh, well thank you! I hope you like it. It's long! Haha.
Yes it is indeed. It's one of my favorite songs, and I thought it went along with the story rather well. He makes me happy, as well. Though not as happy as Ville, I'm afraid. Hahaha.
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haha noice. john mayer seems to have that effect on people, I think it's this humble persona thing he's got going. like "I know I'm awesome, but I'm going to act like I don't know I'm awesome, so that you'll think I'm more awesome." he wears it well, I must say.

and yeah guitar hero I dig. I'm more of a rock band lady myself, I can open up a nice tasty can of whoopass on the drums. I'm glad your skills were an asset for your fiance. whenever I'm getting to know a guy, I always pray that we stick to convos only about games, not actual gameplay. and I suck at fps games too! it's okay, us fps fails, we are a sisterhood. failing together, one level at a time :)

omg I'm hella looking forward to your in depth critique-y-ness! take your time though, no rush whatsoever. s'all good in the hood <3

Haha. I'm glad!
Let me know what you think of this one.
You're welcome. Yay! That excites me! Haha. Ohhhh, yay! I cannot wait to read it! I know it'll be good! Haha. =]
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I'm soo excited.
Hahaha.
I got another update out and I think it's much better than the last.
Woo!
Haha.
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ooo I love doing that! *ahem* ah, t'is a glorious Friday indeed. I have just returned from a stroll around the courtyard that I embarked on with my beloved pet kitten. he is quite the playful little bee.

and the news of your epic video game fail! how I weep for thee. I have a small reserve of knowledge of the gaming world, in the case I may need to use it to woo any gentleman callers *bats eyelashes*

.... yay! that was funnn :D

okay my reply to your message is now officially out there, floating through cyberspace, making it's merry way to you. and might I say, your feedback is brilliant :)

woohoo! I may just love the peer review-y-ness. but of course, there are your time constraints and soforth and suchwhich, so we can mold the advice giving to your flexibility. but lemme just read the message first. eep! I'm soooo exciteddd <3

ohgurl, I'm sooo looking forward to that message :) eep!

haha homg some people in my english class had to debate that topic when we studied rhetoric. idk, but I would think that half the fun of using weed is getting it illegally.... or so I've heard hehehe :)

yayuhh. procrastination, ftw :) I hate term papers, they hate me too. no really they do, they told me so.

Sounds good. :)

yayyyy (:
make sure you tell me when your writting another storyyy (:
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woohoo! and yess I have thought about doing that, my only fear is that it may lose some of it's situational magic you know? and also, I have no clue what I'd change it to x) maybe after you've given it a quick read you can message me and throw some ideas at me about what that would be? I heart brainstorming, it's one of my favie things to do. also, it may be a good idea to figure out where I'm even going to go with the plot lol I will definitely sleep/dream on it. thanks again hella much!!

aw, shucks :) and yeah, I get where you're coming from, feeling unappreciated. the relationship between me and the girl I wrote the story for (she's like the main character and all that shizz, she loves john oh- I don't even listen to the maine lol) is completely non-existent. and so I thought i'd lost the drive to work on it, it was pretty awkward to even read her name for a time... but with fresh eyes, I like the story. and I want to finish it. and I would ADORE your help.

wooo, who's the queen of long ass comments? *looks around*
why, dr. phil-lis, that's who!

really?! and THAT just made tonight, and tomorrow too. so ba-bam! *beams, sniffles* that really touched me gurl, right here *points to heart* :')

I really should be thanking you though. your dilemma reminded me of the dilemma I had with the measly "story" (if you wanna call it that lol) that I have posted on here. I thought i'd never even wanna look at it again, but if you can be motivated to write even yet, then so can I! so, I think I'm gonna keep writing it, just to show myself I can. and if anyone who had read it loves me for doing so, they have only you to thank. loveloveloveeeeeee <3 :D

Alright, sounds good. It's just such a good story =/

psh no big dealie. CIVILIZATION! brought to you by: tempermental people.
and you will?! woohoo! now, thas whasupp :)

no worries! glad I could help. and yeah, I'm sorry. people can be bitches like that. I don't know the details of what all went down that made you want to stop writing it, but I have this general theory: any story that a person writes that's good is good because they wrote it for them and the happiness it brings them. anytime someone acts childish with you about YOUR story, it's because they're semi-ignorant and they have it in their head that the story is for them. so you should just laugh at them, they made a funny :)

...soory. O.o seems I got carried away with the deep "advice". just call me, dr. phil-lis.