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  • Simply Ace

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    Thank you for the story comment!!! I'm glad you like it so much! :D
    September 23rd, 2010 at 02:07am
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    Thanks for the story comment! :D
    September 20th, 2010 at 04:54am
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    Thanks for commenting on "Saving Grace"! :)
    September 12th, 2010 at 04:59pm
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    Hey thank you for the comment it made me laugh! :) I have been thinking about a sequal maybe I will but the problem is finding a new plot :D
    September 12th, 2010 at 03:43am
  • PrescriptionDreams

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    Ohhhh. Yeah, I can relate to that. Southern California is waaay better than Northern California.
    Good thing the beaches are clean!
    September 6th, 2010 at 09:04pm
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    Haha, thanks. Pensacola is really that bad? It seems like it'd be a cool place to live, I mean, being in Florida and all.
    September 6th, 2010 at 07:46pm
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    Hey! Haha, nah, I'm from California. It must have just been a coincidence because [as lame as this sounds] I just used a WWE wrestler's name for the restaurant title. :]
    September 6th, 2010 at 03:15am
  • McQueen

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    Haha aw thank you so much for the love! I appreciate it :) I hope you like the future updates! :)
    September 1st, 2010 at 02:19am
  • Chillyponygal

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    Yeah, I sorta, accidently added the part of the chapter meant for Chapter 15 so really, everything is fixed and normal now. You were just special and were able to read a little extra for Chapter 15 which I think I will be updating soon anyway. Te-he. This is probably a confusing message.
    Ahem. Everything is in it's proper order now. Ignore what I said earlier. I need some sleep. LOL!
    September 1st, 2010 at 01:01am
  • Jon Toews

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    haha YES! you were the one to point that out! Nice job! thanks for reading :)
    August 27th, 2010 at 12:44am
  • UpAndUp

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    Thanks for the story comment!!!! And sorry I didn't put what he said. But it was going to be said later on in the story and I think it will be more exciting later on. But thanks anyways. :)
    August 22nd, 2010 at 09:06pm
  • Skylight Madness

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    Awww thanks for the story comment!
    It's going to be chop full of surprises (:
    August 12th, 2010 at 07:43am
  • love_never_fails

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    haha he won't be the whole story...i think lol.. I haven't quite planned it out that far, but as far as I know he'll get better
    August 12th, 2010 at 04:19am
  • uniraffelickems

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    Im happy you like it!
    I know right hes so..... mysterious...&etc.

    Gosh you readers are in for more mysterys! hehehe

    I might update again! But i have my other stories to do.
    But I think i will!
    August 10th, 2010 at 01:08am
  • bobane

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    I'm glad you like the story! I would marry James too :P
    August 9th, 2010 at 05:27am
  • Chillyponygal

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    thanks for the comment!
    And as for Jesse and Cameron, I'm trying to write so they both have faults, but are both very likable.
    It's hard!
    But I'm glad to see that my readers are now starting to go and be on teams :P
    August 8th, 2010 at 10:20pm
  • Aznskywalker

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    Hey! thanks for the comment on my story! it means alot.
    and im so jealous.
    i loooooove love love the name Sophia!
    August 8th, 2010 at 01:35am
  • HurricaneAdrina

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    But if Vyphra had stuck around long enough, Libany would have figured it out. Even without his senses telling him. He knew something was up with Vie when he got back. She just wouldn't tell him what it was, and he didn't want to push her by using their mind link together and just taking the information from her like he could have. He'd just figured that she would tell him what was bothering her in her own time. But the very next day she disapeared and the next time he saw her, which was two weeks later, she was already a newborn vampire and she wasn't pregnant anymore.

    -adrina
    August 7th, 2010 at 10:28am
  • HurricaneAdrina

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    Vyphra was human when she got pregnant. And after sex it takes a few hours for the egg to be fertilized, implanted in the uterus and to begin growing. Once all THAT happens THEN the mate should know his female is pregnant because the harmones in her body have caught up with the actions of the embryo. But by the time Vyphra's scent changed to where Libany would have known she was pregnant, he was already off accomapnying Carson on an assignment that Tyler had given them both. And while Libany as gone, Vyphra went wondering off on her own and was accidently infected with a dead vampire's venom while she was pregnant. By the time Libany got back, the baby had already absorbed the venom, and the venom blocked out the harmones that would have triggered Libany's senses that would have told him that his mate was pregnant. After that Vyphra disappeared and met Dimtri, and so forth and so forth happened. So yeah, Vyphra's been through a lot. Again if you could please delete this when you're done, it would be greatly apriciated.

    -adrina
    August 7th, 2010 at 10:24am
  • HurricaneAdrina

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    Yeah, but you have to understand Libany doesn't trust her anymore. He probably wouldn't even believe her if she tried that. And she knows that which is why she didnt in the first place. that and she wanted to spare him her pain.

    -adrina
    August 7th, 2010 at 08:27am