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  • Tatyana Tyson

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    Sorry. I didn't mean to snap. I'm trying my best. I might update SOMETHING today, even if it isn't much, just for you.
    January 12th, 2011 at 09:03pm
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    ... I'm sorry. Zach is a very complex character to write a POV for. I have to get his feelings just right, without having him sound cheesy, or like he just doesn't care.... It's stressful, okay?!
    January 12th, 2011 at 09:02pm
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    shit im sorry your right it was scars! my bad(: thanks for letting me know
    January 12th, 2011 at 08:20pm
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    yeah thats the right POV
    Its after they got into the fight and Rain was angry so she stayed in her room. the reason she was in front of thr door was because she threw her ipod over there and sorta broke down in front of it. Mathews is the Benji's last name if you didnt catch that. Who's POv did you think it was?
    January 11th, 2011 at 09:48pm
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    hiya,
    so i reread my story and all of the POv'd are correct so maybe you read it wrong or skipped a chapter. And at the beginning of chapter 19 it is a memory otherwise I am not sure what you are confused about, because nobody else was confused. But thanks for telling me. I will make sure to make it more clear for you I guess.
    January 11th, 2011 at 08:27pm
  • Tatyana Tyson

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    THAT'S IT!! Zach's POV! Why the heck didn't I think of that sooner?! Thank you sO SOSOSOSOSOSO much!! I am forever in your dept. XD
    January 6th, 2011 at 09:18pm
  • Tatyana Tyson

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    HELP ME!!! I'm running out of ideas! My book is going completely downhill, and I have no clue how to get it back up to where it was. help?
    January 5th, 2011 at 02:40am
  • Lhtkid

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    Haha, yea, like simple sentences, compound sentences, long sentences, shrt sentences
    December 17th, 2010 at 02:52am
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    damn sorry i thought i made this clear. he went to scar's house to show rad what girl was on his mind.
    December 14th, 2010 at 11:54pm
  • Hey It's Frankie

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    Lol, totally =]
    December 11th, 2010 at 06:48pm
  • Hey It's Frankie

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    Yes, it does make sense, you kind of sound like my friend, there. lol I love reading too =]
    December 11th, 2010 at 01:47am
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    Or you're just really bored lol xD
    December 10th, 2010 at 10:23pm
  • Hey It's Frankie

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    It'd take you forever to read them all lol
    December 10th, 2010 at 07:52pm
  • Hey It's Frankie

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    Haha!! Well, it's just "I Got You", "Wouldn't Change A Thing" and "If Only I Listened" are the ones I update, the others are just short stories. You know, you really don't have to read them ALL. lol
    December 10th, 2010 at 07:38pm
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    lol =]
    December 10th, 2010 at 07:35pm
  • Hey It's Frankie

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    ha, ha, thanks =] But I can't believe you read them all!! lol The only two people who read all my stories, are my actual best friends from school! lol Oh, and I remember now that you commented on "I Got You" =]
    December 9th, 2010 at 09:14pm
  • Hey It's Frankie

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    Ha ha, thanks =] I love all yours!! Especially "Hidden Love From Him?" It's my favorite out off all your stories!!
    December 8th, 2010 at 08:17pm
  • we are criticized.

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    Thank you for the comments!
    They make me happy(:
    hah but anyways thanks a lot!
    December 8th, 2010 at 03:53am
  • Hey It's Frankie

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    Thank's for the comment on the story!! =]
    December 5th, 2010 at 07:33pm
  • Tatyana Tyson

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    I don't remember doing so, no. Or maybe I forgot... but I don't think I did.
    December 5th, 2010 at 02:38am