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Yeah, I know, I'm just so sorry, but I have my own stories (I put them on FF.net now, not Mibba) so I'm super busy and whenever I'm writing, I'm just writing my own stories, I really don't have the time for others. :( I'm sorry.

... How'd I do what? I didn't post one of your other chapters...

Yes. Posting Khalil's POV, if you follow it, will lead you along the right track to something good. Follow it, and make something happen to cause an issue. A big issue between them. That will make it get exciting, and then you'll be able to figure the rest of the plot. Just don't have it end too soon, kay? Keep it up!

NO I DON'T! I just think that you need to bring in some conflict. Play out what Khalil is thinking a bit more, and have them not talk to each other for a while or something. Things are going too good so far. Not very realistic. There have to be problems. Make some. lol. other than that, its good

I posted!

kay. I just realized though, that if you update on Monday, I wont be able to update until Saturday, so i'm gonna post today instead. I still expect you to keep your half of the bargain though, so don't think you're off the hook :)

i'll make you a deal. You update, and i'll update. Got it? It's up to you. lol

(if you wait too long, i'll post without you, though) XD

Hellooooooo? Anyone here?

... well i've decided to help you edit your story. If you still want me to. I'm not allowed online a lot anymore, but I can get on on the weekends at least. I hope you didn't quit like Kiashu...

Boring and awful I was lying on the couch sick all day

hahaha i know i know, i just gotta stop coming up with ideas

cool. Still thinkin'

you can call me kym or max

I'll kinda need to think about it, okay? Just give me some time to see if I can make room in my seriously packed schedule (HA! not) for choo. Really, i'll get back to you. Soon.

I guess! Mine's been cracking down more than usual too... or maybe I am on myself and I just think it's her.... idk lol!

Same for AP at our school (except the advanced thing. Anyone can take that in any grade... in middle and high school, mostly though.) It's my first year taking AP classes. And so far, it's a ton of fun!
SARCASM. big time. Even though I do enjoy the classes.

Waa? Moi? Are you being serious? What makes joo ask dis question?

Yeah, LOL. I know, I was just warning you, 'cause some people jump right to that, and it never turns out well.

haha, yeah, i got the email abt it xD

Oooooo... ELEVATOR scene. *bounces eyebrows*. LOL. Just don't have them get too close (i.e. have sex), because that would seem a bit unrealistic. To ME anyways.

I meant to ask if you were going to post a chapter that actually adds to the plot soon(no offense intended). It seems like you've been posting chapter that don't really have to do with anything in particular. The characters are just going from one place to the next, and talking a bit. Except for the ring chapter, I don't really see any progression on the story. Maybe i'm wrong... or just too dang impatient (LOL), but that how I'm seeing it.

(Seriously no offense intended! >0< Don't be mad at me.)