Thanks for the comment, and noting the James/Daniel thing[which I just fixed >.<]. I wrote it a few months back, and was finishing it today, but I thought I hadn't mentioned a name. Opps X)
You're very welcome! =) I know Mibba can be confusing sometimes, and you can always ask me questions. I can't guarantee you that I'll have the answers, but I can try to answer. =)
And I'm actually not the person you should send the stories too; I'm a entrant in the contest as well. But you probably should PM the contest runner. Her username is Theo Stockman;
I saw that on a contest thread that you didn't know how to PM, so I thought that I'd drop you a comment. =)
There are several ways to PM people. On some people's profiles, (like yours and mine), there's the two rows of links at the top, including "Add to Friends | Send Message | Profile | Comments | Photos | Stories | Articles | News | Reviews | Poems | Journals | Friends". If you click "Send message", it takes you to the place that you can message them, with their username already typed in. Just type your message, hit 'send', and boom. PMed. But some people's profiles don't show the two rows on top, so you have to use a different way.
On most (if not all) threads, if you click on the person's username, a drop down box will appear, and if you click "send a message", it will bring you to the page with their un already typed, and all you have to do is type it up and press send.
You can also go to your Mibba, and on the column at the right side of the page, in the messaging section, click "send a message". You'll have to type in the person's username yourself, but then just type it up and send.
I'm sure that there are other ways, but those are the three that I use.
If you already found this out, then please, feel free to ignore me. xD
i'm really glad i could help you. i'd like for all the things i say to be the truth. my place in the "cycle" is somewhere i think you'll get to naturally if you've got the right mindset but for now just keep livin' it up. :D
lol. ur welcum. ur story is great. n since every 1 kept telling u wat mistakes u make, i thot i shuld b the 1 to remind u that it is still amazing all the same. besides, every 1 makes mistakes. n i dont believe in bringing down a storyteller just cuz their grammar isnt perfect. ... ...i think im starting 2 ramble a lil. sry. lol. ne way. im glad that my comments make ur day. n thanx 4 taking the time 2 tell me. that means a lot. keep riting! :D
Yeah that is what I ment. Just desctibe certain thing better so readers can get a better picture in their head of what is going on. For example in the second chapter when she was eating breakfast you put in () what kind of ceceral it was. The () was not really needed.