Yeah, I know what you mean (in repliance to your comment on my poem). My parents are divorced and I am older but I wanted to write a childs feelings in the situation.
Thanks for the story comment. Yes, I thought I could do a bit more detail. I'll go over it.
And about her being new in town, but his jail still close? I'm not entirely sure; I just wrote it. Maybe she didn't move that far, or the jail he was in was not in her original town, but halfway between there and where she did move? I'll fix it :)
Thank you for commenting. I know, some people get scared off commenting because it's so personal. I honestly don't mind that much. But that you for commenting, it means so much to me.