No problem! You did a good job with it. Maybe it's because he didn't have a shirt on; if he did I probably would have seen it a different way. Oh well , it's still nice.
That is one awesome story. xD I loved it. You're not rambling! I wish I had the nerve to do that to a teacher. But I probably would if he or she has insulted me like that. Every day a writer gets better. Practice makes perfect. Over the past year and a half, I have become a lot better writer. And I can't believe you were told that! You're a fantastic writer! Did you reach your dream of being an author?
Thank you for commenting on All I'll Ever Need and Not Alone. If you liked them, check out my other story, Forever. Again, I really appreciate your good comments.
Thanks. That was very wise. :) I just take into account real critcism like maybe a spelling mistake or maybe more detail in a character. I can't change choppiness. That's just how I write. I really don't get that many negative comments. I love getting the postiive ones. Even if nobody read the story, I would still write it. I enjoy it so much.
Thanks so much for the comment on Fixed in the Shadows. It's always great to hear that my story flows nicely. :) Some people thought it was too choppy. Whatever. But thanks.
Thank you for the comment!! I'm glad you like it and that it was amazing! And not rushed either. Really means a lot! Omg, I just noticed but I got your story in the comment swap! What a coincidence, does that usually happen? Haha
Thank you for the comment! And we kind of figured that. I messaged him and accused him of wanting more dead grandma make-out smut. xD Yes, I am smartass.
Thank you for the awesome comment! I'm so glad that someone "broke the comment ice" if that makes any sense! I really appreciate any feedback and your comment was more than gracious!
HEY, JUST TO LET YOU KNOW THAT THE COMMENT YOU GOT FROM USER ''Emotional Wind'' IS MEAN. HE SENTS THE SAME COMMENT TO EVERY STORY ON HERE, SO DON'T LET IT GET TO YOU. I'VE SEEN IT IN ONE OF MY STORIES, YOURS AND ONE MORE.
I agree completely. :) And that's always nice to know. I'll be sure to keep you in mind. I'm always up for a good chat too, by the way, so same to you.
Oh, absolutely. I feel the same way. I know I'm not the best writer, and it's honestly not even my chosen path. It's just a hobby for me and my story is a sort of.. closure for something that happened years ago. I've tried to write it probably a thousand times and when I started from his perspective, it just flowed. But it's never a bad thing to know people like what I do. Now I'm all inspired to keep working on eight, which is coming along slowly as I have a bit of writer's block.
Well thanks! That was mighty sweet of you. I am really glad you liked it though. And yeah, I don't really care what anyone thinks of it at all. I only do comment swap because I like for my work to be seen. And I think the idea behind it is great. That specific story isn't anything for anyone but me. I'll definitely continue to post more though! Always nice to have a fan.
Thanks for your comment on How The Heart Beats. :) I'm glad you liked the story, as not everyone has so far. But it's always nice to know my style and such is working for you. ^^ Chapter eight is under way and will hopefully be completed within the week.
Thanks for the comment on "Eponey 1". Let me just explain a simple fact here, I've already posted 80 commets, do you suggest I have no right to get comments for these back? If that's how you feel, why are you bothering partisipating? I want meaningful critique for the story, which mean I need to have critique on all parts, not just the first few chapters. Besides, I think this is the all time low on the comments I got, mind me saying. Since there is no critique, or even mentioning of the story at all, you do know what I'm supposed to do? Which's your last comment, by the way. Is that how you wanted it? I've put up with numerous bad comments, and stories I really did not like, partialy due to the subject. You do know the rules?
Hi! Thank you for your comment on Merely the Shadow of a Dream! It really means a lot! I promise there will be more description! I am working on chapter 2 and I'm hoping for it to be a little more put together! Thanks again! :)