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hmmm....what do you mean? (manga/anime contest)

i was just searching the story page and came across your story. Personally i"m a curious person and when i read your title it struck an interest for me so i started to read. i was pretty confused what was happening but when i start to read something i have this need to have to finish it so i just didn't stop reading it was pretty interesting, and i liked how you worded some things so i still enjoyed even though i was slightly confused. =D

thanks for the welcome. and i would love to hear some of the reads you think i would like for your collection. =D

Sorry for the interruption.

Hi, my name is Shannan. I recently posted a book on mibba called The Old Religion, I have a description below, if you’re interested

[i]An angel, a vampire, a demon, a banished god, a grim reaper, a wizard, a witch, a hole religion,

on is both, one is two but merged, but one is four, one never knew, one but two killed forty people, while they or them didn't know, two are arrange to be married, but one loves another, so does the other, but the other didn’t know.

The Old Religion is a story about a boy -16 yr. old - being followed by an undercover agent named Elika Welsh after a series of unsolved massacres began a year ago. Her only lead is a bag left at the scene, the name Prair written on the tag. A quick talk on the streets and Prair was identified as a crime lord, leader of all the gangs in town. After a year of being this boy’s landlord, Prair begins to involve Elika, by having her drive him around town.

Little by little she begins to uncover the mysteries, she begins to unravel the secrets and solve the puzzle. But it is not the case she began to understand, it was the boy himself, could she fall in love with a Crime lord?[/i]

Plz comment on it if you ended up reading a chapter, thank you^^

Cupcakes :) lol ur like an amazing writer. I ever checked out some of your other stuff n i love it :)

I'm a psychology major. I will definitely write when I have spare time and am not spending it with my boyfriend. As of now I spend about 5-8 hours a night studying and doing homework :/ So free time is hard to come by, and when it's there, the last thing I want to be in front of is a computer or notebook x)

Haha, brilliant!

Yes but unfortunately I need to focus on my grades throughout college. This is my life. I need to make sure I get out everything I've put into it. My writing can wait. The ideas will always be there. Right now I am focusing on a 4.0 in order to get scholarships and maintain those I have. So school will always come first for me. Ill be going into my junior year and now I really have to buckle down and focus on my major

Oh okay cool!
I'll check out the song
Thanks =]

Yes that is a problem :/
And the song is okay, but a little different from my usual choice in music

Hi =]
And thanks.
Yes I see nothing wrong with the words,
maybe it is the people around me?
Um music totally...rocks. I'd have to use rocks.
Music I like? All kinds. I listen to mostly only American rock
but I listen to all types of international music and songs.
And okay, I will sometime =]

I think maybe you misunderstood my comment, I was thanking you for your advice because I was meaning to change the intro anyways :)

I've read quite a few of your stories, I scroll hrough them until I find an intereesting title that catches my eye haha

Wow, that's amazing, congratulations haha:)

Yeah, I'm starting to think that you might just have the most stories posted out of everyone on mibba:)

haha yeah I was in a weird mood that day

I really like your writing style, it's really different from everyone else's on here

Haha thanks for the pic comment! I totally forgot that was up there though and yeah you're right it does need light

I finished ``Once, Twice, Thrice` last week but didn`t comment on it right away.
Your obscure and eliptical poetic style obscures and finally illuminates a truly horrific story. However, couched as it is in it`s dream like prose with multiple rotating points of view we don`t feel the full impact untill well into the story. When finally we realize what is going one the skin begins to crawl as one thinks of the horror that is hidden behind the veil of words that you throw up.
Great story...or is it a poem...there is a fine line.

Hey, I'll be sure to check out your stories. (:

Oh dear, I've just been bomb bared with questions o.O I like teen romance and a little supere natural every now & again. I have the same problem, too many ideas and I get stuck in one place. I'll mostly delete the story maybe with a better repost in the future.The person that gave it too me was having a hard time.