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  • Non_Cherie

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    ikeep reading the chapter over and over again...
    it's like... addicting to feel like that.
    mabe it's because the song "My List" is incredibly sad and heartfelt, and it was stuck in my head anyway, it made the chapter make sense on the first try.

    love is a very painful thing, made ever worse by the fact that it seems impossible to last forever.
    i'm re-thinking making this story a happy ending.
    maybe it'd be better left on a sad note...
    but do you think that would sell? i mean, i'm afriad of letting my english teacher read it, for fear it is too graphic (i'd eliminate the scene that introduced demon/chris, of course) and just stupid once i print it out and let someone other than teenagers read it...

    *sigh*

    ya know, i think we both need hairdryers.
    why?
    to get rid of these damn rainclouds that seem to be attached to our heads.
    January 25th, 2008 at 04:08am
  • Non_Cherie

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    the update was all real, except i didnt know those songs existed when that happened.

    it was based on the first time i was dumped and a guy fell out of love with me. it was the most raw and painful life had ever felt...

    *HUGS X 4*
    January 25th, 2008 at 03:19am
  • Non_Cherie

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    UPDATE-NESS
    January 25th, 2008 at 12:38am
  • Non_Cherie

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    aw,that sucks.

    life's been decent to me.
    though i'm pissed at aspects of it, i'm too tired atm to complain.
    January 23rd, 2008 at 05:02am
  • Non_Cherie

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    lol yeah.
    i'm glad ya like it.
    i think Lacrymosa also seems a l'il less... copyright infringement-ish too.
    and that should so be a word. ^.^

    anyways, how's life going for you?
    better, i hope.

    xoxo
    ~A
    January 23rd, 2008 at 04:34am
  • Non_Cherie

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    yep
    i got tired with the old title.
    so i changed it.
    i posted a journal on it too.
    January 22nd, 2008 at 11:00pm
  • fueledbybeckett

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    Thanks for making me a dirty whore :p
    and thanks for commenting and subscribing,I shall read your stuff.
    January 22nd, 2008 at 06:49pm
  • o rly?

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    yeah, I don't like seeing a new story that I really wanna read, and then seeing that it has like, 200 chapters...AND IS STILL GOING....

    but yay for sequel plans! ^_^
    January 21st, 2008 at 09:24pm
  • Non_Cherie

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    eh, i'll live.
    it only hurts if i run alot... or sprint.
    then i start walking like a demented old man... who shit himself. lol

    but other than that ...minor... setback, all is mostly well... except for thick-headed pretty boys who cant seem to understand the basic signs of flirting.

    lol

    i wanna update... but even i'm not sure what happened at the end of the last chapter... lol i gots confuzzled... otherwise it would hav been longer. tehe
    January 17th, 2008 at 11:22pm
  • Non_Cherie

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    less than peachy.
    i have shin splits... it's pretty straight-forward. i ran too much and put WAAY to much stress on my shins to the point where they've started to split down the sides.
    how can i tell?
    my shins hurt os incredibly bad today i almost started to cry on the track today.
    if i keep running as much as i am and ignore the pain, my shins will eventually break completely.
    ahehe.... NOT AWESOME.

    the good news:
    i dont have to wake up early on saturday to go to a meet. ^.^
    January 17th, 2008 at 11:01pm
  • Non_Cherie

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    : )

    *yawns*
    srry, i just woke up.
    how are you?
    January 17th, 2008 at 03:50am
  • Non_Cherie

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    erm.... wear a blindfold and hope people dont walk into you?
    lol i dunno.
    January 17th, 2008 at 03:35am
  • GoAway

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    haha yeah
    January 17th, 2008 at 01:26am
  • Non_Cherie

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    O_O
    omgi'msosorry
    January 16th, 2008 at 05:48am
  • Non_Cherie

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    lmao
    detail is good.
    unless you happen to be describing the way a corpse decomposes..
    ew.
    January 16th, 2008 at 03:32am
  • Non_Cherie

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    lol if you thought that was graphic...
    i've written some odd stuff.
    January 16th, 2008 at 01:20am
  • Non_Cherie

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    better too much detail than not enough.
    January 15th, 2008 at 11:58pm
  • Non_Cherie

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    mkay.
    whenever you get around to it.
    January 15th, 2008 at 03:00am
  • Non_Cherie

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    I HAVE UPDATED.
    HOPE YOU LIKE IT.
    AND NO, I HAVE NO IDEA WHY I FEEL LIKE WRITING IN CAPS...
    January 14th, 2008 at 02:55pm
  • GoAway

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    thank you super much for commenting my journal :)
    January 12th, 2008 at 04:43pm