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  • FrerardJunkie

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    Thanks for the story comment!
    I'm glad you got the hypocrisy of the chapter and that you're asking so many questions :) As you can see, Gee's a little messed up, but you'll see in future chapters how her relationship with Cassadee affects her and also how Frankie deals with it
    We'll update again soon! :D
    October 24th, 2012 at 10:50am
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    Wow, just read your comment on my story! At first, I didn't know what you were going to say about it, but it was so nice! You were pretty spot-on about a lot of the things you brought up. I do everything very intentionally in this story and it's nice to know someone is understanding it as it goes along. And yeah, I was very proud of that earlier scene I wrote with Gerard defended Frank. Everything go a bit mad because of Gerard's personality change for a while, but you know me, I just can't give Gerard a break! :')
    Thank you so much for the amazing comment! Best comment I've gotten so far, to be honest. Hope you stay with the story!

    Seana xx
    September 3rd, 2012 at 01:54pm
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    Oh your very welcome! And yes I know exactly how you feel! It can be a simple 'this is very good. I really loved it' comment and I can be having my cheeks hurt for the rest of the day. I'm totally with the people below me when they say you would make an awesome horror story/film. :)
    August 11th, 2012 at 06:55am
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    You're welcome! I actually was telling one of my friends about it and how it was so intense, haha! I really think that if you ever decide to write a novel, you should do something with horror or thriller as the genre. (:
    August 11th, 2012 at 03:31am
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    Wow, thank you so much for that comment! I wasn't expecting that at all! :)
    August 9th, 2012 at 07:15pm
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    kjalhfas thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you. You have literally made my day c:
    August 7th, 2012 at 11:12pm
  • Sansa Stark

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    No problem, I loved your story. You could write a horror book or even a movie. That is something that I would read or watch and make me have nightmares, although there isn't a single horror movie that can make me do such thing. Except for the Clockwork Orange, that's the only truly disturbing movie I've ever seen.
    August 7th, 2012 at 12:33pm
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    Thanks so much for the comment on I Found You...I really appreciate it :)
    August 7th, 2012 at 05:12am
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    Thank you for the comment on Daddy's Boy. It made me smile. :) I'm glad people think it's good, especially because it isn't something I normally do, haha.
    August 7th, 2012 at 04:20am
  • Sansa Stark

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    I don't like rushing things, makes the story look sloppy. I'm a sucker for cliff hangers so I like to give them to my readers, I'm such a good spirit, haha!
    I definitely feel like I stepped out of my comfort zone writing about the Jonas Brothers. I did watch their show on Disney Channel when I was younger and it's pretty nice, but yeah I don't squeal for them. I don't even think they're hot. Nick's pretty adorable, but that's it. And I like a good challenge.
    August 7th, 2012 at 03:16am
  • the maine.

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    Thank you so much for your comment on my story! That seriously the nicest comment that I've ever received! (:
    I'm really glad that you enjoyed it and don't think my writing is rusty. That's good things to hear for me, haha!
    August 7th, 2012 at 03:13am
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    Oh hey there, neighnorino!
    Thank you for the story comment, it's very appreciated. And you're right, I'm not going to answer those questions just now *evil laugh*.
    I don't like the Jonas Brothers either, oddly enough, I just thought they would fit the theme of the story. I mean, look at Nick, he's so... he looks like a fucking angel hahahaha! Also, it's funny to write about someone you're not used to write about, it's a challenge!
    About her past, well, more details will be revealed later of course.
    As for the first question, it is a little bit of both. A story of God is a story of love. Not that I believe in Him, I actually don't, but I feel like the people who do deserve all of my respect and I feel like, if there really is a God, he would be so sad at how His children kill in His name, you know what I mean?
    August 7th, 2012 at 02:37am
  • jazzy.

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    Brittani!! please don't hate me for not responding fast at all! for some reason, my laptop won't let me go to mibba at all on any web browser and i don't know why. i tried looking online to find something to fix it but i couldn't do anything. so for now i'm using the computer downstairs. :)

    how have you been?? i hope everything's alright! how's your school year? friends? family? issues? accomplishments? i want to know everything!!

    i've been soo busy lately!!! i've been figuring out college stuff, doing scholarship stuff, working at the pharmacy still, keeping up at school, and i was in my school's drama production! it was so much fun and literally the best part of school because so many cool people take part and in the end we just feel like a big family. i did the pit band this year with a couple of my friends and my awesome band director :). we had 4 productions of it within 3 days and it was so busy because we had school at the same time, but it was fine. before the last show, we have this tradition at our school where the seniors that are leaving make a speech. basically, everyone in the room bawls their eyes out, and i was no exception :') it's funny looking back on it, but apparently everyone was surprised when i cried and thought it was cute because i'm a shy little girl hahah :))

    hmm. i might have told you (i don't really remember) but in exactly 20 days i'm going away to costa rica for 9 days!! i'm so excited and it's going to be a ton of fun. it's coming up so soon and i have a countdown on my phone and everything for it so i can't wait haha.

    and also senior ball is coming up towards the end of may! i got my dress in mid/late-january and it's gorgeous. i absolutely love it, and it doesn't look that bad on me :p last year my friend Garett asked me and we went together, and this year he asked me again! so i just can't wait and it's all great and happy.

    so i guess i'll end this here. i don't know how often i'm going to be able to answer back (hopefully faster than before) but i'll try! and i still will try to get some new story out maybe possibly i don't know but yeah. i hope to hear from you soon, love you!
    March 15th, 2012 at 08:17pm
  • Sweet Pandemonium.

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    It's absolutely fine and you got the right person :)
    It's called Frerard - Someone Like You. It should be the first video to come up if you search for it on Youtube :)
    January 19th, 2012 at 05:13pm
  • the blissfully dead

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    Thank-you! I really can't decide though so I'll probably end up doing both. I'll try and start writing one soon =)
    January 16th, 2012 at 11:45pm
  • the blissfully dead

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    This is a really urgent and important question -well kind of...

    If I wrote a frerard, do you think I should go with a stockholm syndrome frerard or-this one sounds a little crazy, but I have plans for it-a zombie apocolypse frerard?!
    I'd be eternally grateful if you could give me your opinion XD
    January 16th, 2012 at 11:06pm
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    I wouldn't mind my siblings but they've made it clear they don't like me. I don't see my half sister that much because I don't live with my mum and when I do see her she always wants to argue with me because I moved out and she's pretty pissed off about that. My step sisters are still upset about their parent's divorce and having to move in with me and my dad with their mum, which I understand, I know how bad divorces can be. But they're trying their best to be horrible to me and it just gets on my nerves that all my siblings seem to dislike me. Sorry, that sounded so bitchy and whiney! X(
    January 16th, 2012 at 11:02pm
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    The concert was amazing and yes, we were safe, but not in that way because nothing like that happened. One girl fainted because Alex, the lead singer, kept making sex jokes all the time and there were lots of... 'unique' people there. This couple looked like a rainbow threw up on them or something, the guy had neon blue hair and the girl's skin was orange-Liverpool is famous for its fake tan. You must love your sister a lot to teach her how to make ground beef. My sisters- well, one's my half sister and the others are step sisters- are really annoying -.-
    January 16th, 2012 at 05:13pm
  • crutal

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    Ahw, thank you so much for the story comment. :3 It made my morning! I've actually been trying to write the next chapter and should have it up by the end of this month, and if I don't, please get on me about that. I know I'm a terrible updater... xD
    January 16th, 2012 at 01:25pm
  • Tayyyyyy

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    Hey, first of all I’d like to say I’m sorry for how long this has taken to get back to you—I was working a lot and now I’m currently in the Florida Keys visiting my father, so my free time has been limited, but I fully plan on answering you now! :D

    Every time you critique or compliment my writing, it seriously makes my day. I try not to pick at my own writing, because I am proud of it, I wouldn’t post it if I wasn’t proud of it, but I do fear people’s expectations a lot of the time. I would never say screw it on this story, though, I love it too much to let it go, sometimes it may take me a little longer to get a chapter out, but I always promise that I will finish this, I already know how I’m going to, haha, I just need to be able to get there without feeling the pressure, ya know? “Art exposes a part of us that is special, our heart and soul” I love that, because it’s so true, everyone has something special inside that is just begging to be let out and being able to express it through an art form is amazing- I’m glad that I (I think) I’ve managed to find mine. This is what I want to do for the rest of my life—I just want to write. I’m really excited about the chapters coming up though, like the next three are what I’m really focusing a lot of my attention on, it’s gonna be great. And Kelly was SO pissed, haha, she came up to visit me the other week and I swear to god, I thought she was going to smack me when I asked her about it, hahaha.

    Yeah, that does suck receiving the same punishment as that douche bag, but I guess the school is trying to be fair? Like you would have both committed the violence, so one can’t get off easier than the other, even though, morally, I think you should, because it IS just self-defense. Dudebros is such a great word, I love it, it really just sums up all those assholes who think they’re the greatest thing since God talked to Moses, ya know? When in reality they’re the biggest tools around. There is no glory in picking on someone weaker- it just shows how much of a pathetic piece of shit you really are. I hated seeing that shit in school when I was younger, when I felt I was too young to really do anything about it. Looking back now, I wish I had- though there was one instance where this major dudebro saw my friend and I hug in the hallway when I was like in the eighth grade I think and he kept laughing and calling us lesbians. Now, that honestly is not a good insult and really shouldn’t mean anything to me, but the fact that he thought he had the upper hand on us and could belittle us in front our peers set my skin on fire and I got all up in his face and told him to fuck off, chest to chest, nose to nose and he asked if I was gonna hit him, trying to be a tough guy. That’s when I realized that the violence wasn’t worth it, why get myself in trouble and stoop down to his level, ya know? So I just rolled my eyes, scoffed at him, and walked away, the better person.

    I think “grow a vagina” would definitely be the better phrase, I agree. Vaginas would always win hands down, haha

    When I finally realized that he had actually stolen from me, I confronted him and was just like, “I know what you did. I know what you did and I know that one day it is going to come back and bite you in the ass. And I hope it hurts.” And of course he came back with “I have no idea what you’re talking about,” bullshit and after that I just let it go. I knew I wasn’t getting the money back and honestly I didn’t even care about the money, I just hated the fact that this person I trusted would do something like that to get back at me for something that could have easily been talked through like rational adults. We didn’t speak for six months. Just recently he came back into my life though and he apologized. He’s friends with everyone else I’m friends with and I wasn’t going to be that dick who kept their friends separate from someone else just because I held a grudge. I wanted to be the bigger person and make them happy, so he comes back around from time to time- but that bond that we shared before? The friendship we had? It’s never coming back. He burned that bridge the moment he made the decision to do that to me. But whatever. It’s done and over with, we’re merely acquaintances now.

    Well that girl, whether or not it was considered cheating, doesn’t deserve you. She shouldn’t have betrayed your trust—you were still friends and friends always come first before anything else. How’d that end up ending?

    The Used is so much fucking fun live- not the best show I’ve ever seen, but definitely some of the most fun that I’ve had, I guess just because I’ve loved them since they came out- I mean I’ve been following them since like 2002 when the first self-titled came out, so seeing them is always exciting. I think I’ve seen them… six or seven times I believe? And I’ve met all of them, but I’ve Jeph and Dan twice, they’re all huge sweethearts.

    I was arrest for shoplifting jewelry out of JCPenny, it was stupid and I totally regret not paying closer attention, haha, but it was a learning experience and I haven’t done it since. It’s been a little over a year since then, but thankfully I got it reduced to a noise disturbance so the shoplifting isn’t on my permanent record- now THAT would suck.

    My all time favorite song by Sevenfold is definitely Second Heartbeat, hands down and Waking the Fallen is probably my favorite album as well, but it’s hard to tell, haha. One of my next tattoos is going to be my Sevenfold tattoo- it’s gonna be the death bat and arched over it it’s going to say, “Come back to the days when we were young” and arched underneath it’s going to say, “Come back to the days when nothing mattered” and I think I’m going to get a little ‘foREVer’ somewhere in one of the wings. (: What better way to commemorate my love for Jimmy and my favorite song, right?

    I’m getting the Jersey tattoo somewhere on my arm—I just got my first technical Jersey tattoo a few weeks ago when I was waiting in line to see Taking Back Sunday in Philly, hahaha, we were chilling in line and there was this really nice tattoo parlor next store to the venue so we were like fuck it we’ve got an hour to spare. It just says N.J. on my wrist, but it’s cute and simplee.

    So far I have a few planned out- the Sevenfold one I told you about, the Jersey one I told you about, then I have a memorial tattoo for my friend Joe, it’s just gonna be a Mustang(the horse) with the date of his birth and death, because he drove a mustang and it was his most prized possession, and that’ll go on my ankle or something. Then I’m getting a Used tattoo with the dripping heart, but I’m going to work some My Chem in there with bats arching over the heart as they slowly morph into the Revenge guns and somewhere intertwined the MCR lyrics “I won’t go down by myself, but I’ll go down with my friends” or “take my fucking hand and never be afraid again” because one, it’s ironic because they’re not that great of friends anymore, and two, I love those lyrics and I secretly hope for Gerard and Bert to one day reunite, haha. And then I’m getting an Asbury Park tattoo, because I consider that my home, even though I live down the street, it’s where I spend a good majority of my time, it’s the beach, it’s beautiful, and there’s so much history there.

    I love the pain is inevitable, suffering is optional. It’s a very intense inscription and I think that you should get it either way, fuck everyone else, the only thing that matters is what it means to you. And the phoenix sounds fucking AWESOME. Seriously, that’s so detailed, it’s insane. It’ll cost maad cash money, but if you find the right tattoo artist, it could come out looking so fucking amazing.
    January 15th, 2012 at 11:38pm