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All right then, I'll come up with a short prologue. Does in matter who's POV it's in? (As long as it's not your character lol)

Here, right? Could you start so I could have an idea of what you want? Unless you really want me to start. I might be able to work up a mysterious scene. Oh, and I was gonna ask, can you write in present tense?

You're welcome.

Tell me about it. lol I have herniated discs in my lower back and they are evil bastards. Doctors don’t want to mess with them because it could make it worse. So I just do yoga to help.
I love the layout you used by the way.
Also, thank you for making me an admin.

New title is great, a little more fitting. Just reading the new chapter

The discs in my spine were acting up today when I needed to get crap done. So it made it hard to walk and stand. I had to do a lot of walking today. Some of the errends were legal stuff that sucked.
But I did get my concert ticket I wanted so thats good :D

Yeah. It was kind of a bad day.

lol I read it. Thanks hun. :D It made my bad day better.

Nah that's cool, it would suit anyway

They range of all ages.

They all spread rumors and act like they're 17.

Where I live, they are all the same.

Not really. It's their personalities I don't like.

I dun' know why I hate girly-girls.
They just irk me.

It's okay if you sound like your grandma.
I'll adopt you and you can wear moo moo's and bake me cookies.

I will not repeat it.
You don't need to understand that badly. O.o

I think it's funny because 'gay' sounds like 'may' and 'may' reminds me of 'mason' and there's this dude at my school who's sister that looks like Jack Fairy from Velvet Goldmine. It's a very complicated process, but i eventually find humor in it... XD

Gay is a funny word? I agree.

They weren't.... Oops, sorry D:
Maybe... They could've had it wrong... Maybe it was what they THOUGHT were the inhabitants... But they weren't...?? D:
Sorry D=

Ok, I did that... Lol. [: