June 10th, 2012 at 10:11am
Oh, hell no. You wouldn't get a story deleted for that. Looking at modern published works might be a better example of what is proper. Using sentence fragments and run-on sentences for artistic merit is fine. It's when people do it to be lazy or because they don't know the rule that it becomes a problem.
If your story gets reported for sentence fragments, just reply and say 'I do this for artistic reasons''. A story editor will look at that, check, and remove the report.
One more chapter?! That's such a bittersweet feeling--one the one hand it'll be over, but it will be finished, a complete entity all on its own!