Hey, thanks for the comment. Have you checked your email? I just meant that the atmosphere was different. When I wrote it it felt more laid back and less creepy which I did intentionally. I was hoping you guys got that when you read it.
Yes, catching all the typos I've known where there, but is (or are) to lazy to change. LOL But I'm glad that someone sees them. No one else notified me about them.
Thanks for the story comments! And you can read Kayzi's story by clicking on her user name and that will take you to her page then click on Imprisioned. Trust me its worth it! If you noticed (you might have I'm not sure) I repeated "the needle" a second time when it didn't need to be repeated. On some of the other chapters there were other typos.
Very good and a little sad too. My mom making me a birthday cake right now but she won't let me help because I always try to sneak in a bite. lol
Don't worry about it I like using question marks too.