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Thanks so much for the comment on my first chapter! *hugs* I think its supposed to be creepy *looks at Ash's comments* I see you know Ash lol

Hey, thanks for the comment. Have you checked your email? I just meant that the atmosphere was different. When I wrote it it felt more laid back and less creepy which I did intentionally. I was hoping you guys got that when you read it.

I got to read ash's new part in her story first!! XD ya need to get on cause it rules! X3 oh and hello!!

Haha, I won't! :D

thanks so much for the comment!(:

That short story you read is a Salena/Kyle alternate ending. So they would be either 18 or 19.

Hehe! I'm a workin on it!

Yes, I know. We have yearbook tomorrow!! YAY! Can we edit stories?

*waves* Bye bye, mi amigo, I shall miss you!

Yes, catching all the typos I've known where there, but is (or are) to lazy to change. LOL But I'm glad that someone sees them. No one else notified me about them.

Of course I told you to comment and I love them! And its not too much. Not anything I'm not used to or that you already do. LOL

Yep, typo I warned you...but I don't think anyone noticed. Shhh! LOL You really like to comment, don't you?

I'm very glad you feel that way. =P It makes the Ash very happy! lol

I told ya it was better! From now I want you to check all my other papers from that standard.

My grammer was perfect...I ran it through a grammer check.

Thanks for the story comments! And you can read Kayzi's story by clicking on her user name and that will take you to her page then click on Imprisioned. Trust me its worth it! If you noticed (you might have I'm not sure) I repeated "the needle" a second time when it didn't need to be repeated. On some of the other chapters there were other typos.

I already sent you a friend request...

Hey, Caitlin!

Thank you for the poem comment :D

Very good and a little sad too. My mom making me a birthday cake right now but she won't let me help because I always try to sneak in a bite. lol
Don't worry about it I like using question marks too.