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Thanks for the comment on my poem :3 xx I'm still in love with my ex who loves someone else so i kinda know how you feel xx ever want a chat...just add me as a friend and i will listen :) x

I always did. It helped tons. Journals allow you to get out your feelings in a non destructive manner. It also helps you understand yourself better. =/

Wiping clean a slate is always interesting. Maybe not exactly nice or fun, but interesting. Just look at it as a new adventure and have fun with it! Try things you haven't tried before (no drugs, though!!) and maybe you'll find what you're looking for. I wish you the best!!!!!

Then you need to find new friends. Look, love, you're fifteen. Just started high school right? I lost all my friends and made new ones when I started high school. Everything changes because the rules are different. You can't expect everything to stay the same. I didn't meet my best friend until Sophmore year. =/ Don't feel like everything falling down around your ears, cause there's always things that could be worse. I understand why you're so upset though. I've been there. My best friend is my ex's cousin and she took his side on the relationship even though he handled it really badly. Now he's being immature and makes me want to hate him even though he's a nice guy and I know I can't. It may not get better, but dealing with everything will get easier. You should look for different friends and slowly integrate yourself with them or find something that means something to you so you don't feel so . . empty and useless. I found choir and that helped tremendously my freshman year. Find something to distract yourself. Not fully, but just until you can handle everything else.

I know how you feel, love. I dated a guy I wasn't supposed to date because he was leaving. We fell in love, but he didn't tell me until AFTER he left and decided that he "didn't need my shit" and sent me a novel of a letter in apology. He asked me to wait, so I waited. For two years. I made a mistake and told him I couldn't do long-distance. He stopped writing, even though I wrote him. I wallowed in misery for another year until he came back and then tried to get in touch with him because I still had unanswered questions. He told me we have "nothing to discuss" and that was it. I was over him. The worst part is, though, I can't get away from him because he's my best friend's cousin, who happens to live right next door to her, and I know ALL of her family. His little brother and my bff's little brother have crushes on me, their mom's adore me. I've had Thanksgiving and Christmas at their houses. His little sister is my brother's bff. . . It goes on. I can't get away from him. It's quite tragic, really. And he's put me off all relatioships. And I can't say I hate him, cause he's a really nice guy, even though he makes me feel like I'm not welcome.

Thanks for the compliment on my poem :)

I know how you feel, thank you for commenting on my poem. It's been two and a half years and I still can't forget the guy, though I believe I'm over him, which is a vast relief, I'll tell you that much.

Thanks for the comment. :D

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nice natural disaster poem. very heartfelt. hey how do i change my profile background????????? need help!!!!!!!!!

Thank you for your comment on my poem :D

awww no problem, credit given where its due : )

Pff, writers are nearly always their own worst critics. We see our own mistakes much more easily than anybody else sees our mistakes.
And honestly, this is going to sound horrible, but I don't waste my time on poets who aren't that good. But reading your work does not waste time, it is all time well-spent. You are a very good writer. Besides, putting yourself in other people's situations, seeing from their perspective, that takes a good imagination. Pulling it off takes talent. And you do pull it off.
And thank you. :) Very kind.

Thanks for the comment! :) They are indeed a wonderful thing...
But you're a really good writer! I don't know why you're not getting more comments, because it's all much better than most of what I see on here. I definitely plan to comment some of your work when I've got a bit more time.

lols thanx :)

Its never easy to break up with someone and the old "it isn't you its me" line just makes it worse. Imagine standing there with the one you love, the one who has been beside you for the best moments of your life and listen to them tell you they don't want to be with you any more and you hear the break of your heart as you burst in to tears. Break ups are always hard and they always will be but next time try using a different line. Try telling me the truth! tell me I never loved you! I was just using you because it will be a lot less painful than what you did to me...

With poetry, though, sometimes it's better to analyze more, so you can catch things hidden. :)

Thanks for commenting on Death Is Our Love!
I did write it, and I'm glad you like it! :)
It is interesting that you came to that conclusion, I think most people would've just written it off as rhyming nonsense, so it's cool to hear that that's what you got out of it.

ok everyone please comment i wanna hear your thoughts i wanna know what u think