February 27th, 2011 at 05:52am
I understand what you mean about me mentioning that details are important. I just didn't want anyone to read it as fillerish, I'll take that out.
I've noticed my style seems a bit mechanic at times. I'll try to work on that.
Thank you so much!
Just a short explanation: it was a VERY cheesy thing for her to say, and definitely forced. Having been in a similar situation before (except not really, just in front of a bunch of people accidentally confessing that I had a girlfriend ehum, awkward) what you say is... just so wrong. I said I loved my girlfriend and I'd only been with her for two weeks, it sort of just came out all clichéd and odd. So my picturing Shawnee saying that was more, trying to mend the situation and definitely choosing the wrong words. XD