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Basically, I read your story chapter by chapter & point out any errors (spelling, grammar, etc) that way you can go back & correct them, point out things that aren't 100% correct in wording but get the point across that way those can be properly re-worded, & tell you what I liked and/or didn't like.

@ Young Diamond
Tee-hee thanks! :D In celebration of getting it reviewed I actually updated the story haha :D

@ littlegirlbri
I've never done anything like that before, so how would that work?

@ iBleedSarcasm

I'm good! :) And congrats on getting your story reviewed in an article on the homepage! I gotta continue reading the story myself.

Hiya~
I've come across your story, How to be a Princess, & I was wondering if you'd welcome a full beta review on your story.
Complete with point outs of mistakes, and my thoughts on the story.

@ Young Diamond
Yes I do! :D How are ya?

Hey, sorry we haven't talked in a while. Remember me?

It was a very logical conclusion, so I think we can put that on my tab :) You are welcome, I thought it was a shame that no one else had commented, getting feedback is half the fun!

Definitely a compliment, sorry if you misread it! It's just not the type of story I usually read, you know, with animals and everything(: I really liked it , though, as I said.

365 Days has been updated! I'm so sorry for that long wait!!! <3 Hope you enjoy this new trip of Evie's x3

Thank you for the comment (:
Only some of the bruises (the fresh ones mentioned) are from sex. I probably should've elaborated on where exactly he got the majority of the bruising XD

But thanks again (:

No problem, I loved it!

Um, it was on siren_cryer's blog about why aren't there many African-American stories/characters on Mibba. She mentioned something about "street fiction" in the blog (that's what I meant to ask you about, street fiction, not urban fiction). Is street fiction the same thing?

Hmm, Mahuwena. That's such a pretty name! But I'm pretty sure that I'm gonna pronounce it wrong, so I'll call you Momo for the time being. I'm sure you know this already, but I am Tamara. =^.^= It's a pleasure to meet you.

*Accepted*

Lol. Everyone has different views. I just rather say "minority," because at times it doesn't just apply to black people, but other ethnic groups as well and I don't want to have to name all of them. I don't believe I have caught your name.

You're welcome. I totally understood what you meant, too. Quizilla is even worse than Mibba. I hope you don't leave, though. I really like your Disney Princess story. I've also been looking at some of your other activity on the site (because I have nothing else better to do), and I saw this one blog you commented on. Now, what I'm wondering is, what is Urban Literature?

Haha, yeah. At the time, I couldn't find any urban stories on mibba, but now I'm happy to say that there are a few. We're still the minority, but I think with a little more time, we can even out the playing field. There are a lot of great mainstream stories on here, though. So I guess in the meantime, I'll have to be satisfied with them.



P.S. I totally agree, we should be friends! =^.^=

oh thank you.

Hah! No problem, I am actually really glad someone had the balls to post that, it's been the words in my head for a while. :3

If you don't mind me asking, which views are you talking about?